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[Fanfiction] Love at first sight {Lost}

Sep 21, 2010 13:51

TITLE: Love at first sight
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
 CHARACTER: Rachel Carlson/Richard Alpert (mentions Jack/Juliet, Amy/Horace)
GENRE: het, romance
RATING:  PG
WORD COUNT:  1,715
SUMMARY: When Amy sets Rachel up on a blind date, she has no high hopes, but then a tall, dark hair man shows up, changing everything. Written for challenge #14 "the ( Read more... )

{feature} rachel_richard, {fandom} lost, {community} schmoop_bingo, {format} oneshot, {format} series, {feature} rachel carlson, {feature} richard alpert, {community} lost_land

Comments 7

pann_cake September 21 2010, 17:22:51 UTC

Yaaaay, you posted it! <3

RACHEL IS SO LUCKY. Blind dates are never that attractive! I love how you describe Richard's voice:

Never before in her life, had she heard a voice that was so sexy and engaging, and when she slowly turned around to get a better look at her company she felt her jaw drop by surprise.

That is pretty much how I feel every time he opens his mouth on the show, lol. :P And of course the description of his eyes and his ARMS (I have such a thing for his arms...), just lovely.

You did a good job with Richard, he is the perfect gentleman. And was that a little hint that he is still immortal? I like it.

Great job, hun! I knew you could do this challenge. :D

nicis_anatomy September 21 2010, 18:23:34 UTC

I did ;) It was surprisingly easy to write this. Once I started I had no real problems. Weird ...
Rachel is lucky. She deserve to be happy in this world, and since Richard was her stalker in her other life (he was the one following her to the playground to show Juliet that Rachel and Julian were fine, right?) he had no problems with Rachel in this life ;)
They even look good together, don't you think?

And he really is a gentleman. And good looking. And nice. And his voice ... *sighs*

Thank you ;) I'm really glad (and relieved) that you liked it ;)

I think it's time to get a Richard icon ...

pann_cake September 21 2010, 18:41:27 UTC

I agree, Rachel had a tough life, she should be happy in sideways-world. Yup, Richard was the one following her around for Ben, lol. That was one of the reason I had Juliet and Richard get together in one of my fics, but it totally works with Rachel too. :)

I could definitely hear Richard's voice saying those lines. I hope to see more of him in this universe! Double date! :D

Richard is really the most perfect man on the show (in my opinion). I just love how he's so calm, but every once in a while he'll do something badass (like grabbing Ben and throwing him to the ground by the real John Locke's body!). So awesome.

lol, I have so many Richard icons stored on my computer, it's a little ridiculous. :P

thorongirl September 22 2010, 01:11:53 UTC

Thank you! Loved this story. So unexpected.

nicis_anatomy September 22 2010, 11:32:33 UTC

I'm glad you did. Thank you ;)

nighttiming1022 September 23 2010, 17:59:59 UTC

I like how you worked in his eyelashes :D This was such an interesting take on these two characters. Great job.

nicis_anatomy September 23 2010, 19:21:01 UTC

Thank you ;) I might have stolen this line from an interview I read about people reacting to his eyes. But I'm not sure ... Anyway, I thought it would work and be something Rachel (or any other woman) would say *g*