Challenge #300: In Whispers

[genjyosgirl]

The room was silent, cold and dark. He knelt on the floor in a never-ending vigil

Comments

[nochick_fics]

D: *wibbles*

Beautiful and saaaaaaad. Loved it.

[genjyosgirl]

*passes kleenex*

D-:

Thank you!

[laurose8]

Very touching. Especially the last three words.

[genjyosgirl]

:) Thanks.

[suanz]

Very apt. Nice work!!

[genjyosgirl]

Thank you so much!

[feait]

beautiful and poignant. Kougaiji's confession is spot on.

thank you.

[genjyosgirl]

Thank you for the kind comments!

[mika_1]

It was a great poem and I really want to see Princess Iron Fan/Tessen Koushu (also know as Rakshasi/Rasetsunyo) been portaryed in this manga. I notice that most fanfiction most people do not even show her willingly the Palm Leaf Fan (banshou fan in Japanese) as that is the fan that she used several miles away to get revenge on Kougaji's defeat in the original Journey to the West even though it has been mentioned in Minekura's 'Comparative Analysis' and it also has been shown in other adaptations of the Journey to the West. I can only assume that most fans of this manga did not read the original Journey to the West story or have seen other adaptations of the legend.

[genjyosgirl]

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Very interesting insight about Rasetsunyo.