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0penhearts

Chances (7/ )

Jun 28, 2010 16:59

title: Chances (7/ )
fandom: Glee
pairing: Rachel/Will
rating: PG13ish
spoilers: Through Sectionals.
a/n: This part . . . is pretty long, and things happen. This is the part I've probably spent the most time on so far, so I hope you guys like it. takemeaway is a huge help, and awesome beta, and I think still needs to watch Community.

Prologue
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pairing: rachel/will, fic, series: chances, tv: the rachel and will show

Comments 36

lozbabie July 8 2010, 11:19:52 UTC

I just read the whole story and I LOVE it. Its good to see a decent Will/Rachel story that's future fic and not just smut. Can't wait for more chapters!

0penhearts July 12 2010, 10:34:59 UTC

Thank you so much! It's been really fun to write them in the kind of in between place that's future, but still so close to where they are now.

lozbabie July 12 2010, 10:45:34 UTC

Can't wait for more!

And I just noticed that you write Community fic! I've just discovered this wonderful show, so once I'm up to date will have to make sure to come and read your fic.

0penhearts July 12 2010, 10:49:13 UTC

DO IT! Community is the number one awesome thing in my life right now, no joke. The fandom is insanely wonderful.

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smittenrosebud July 11 2010, 16:35:25 UTC

Whee, three parts to read! :)

I loved the steady progression of their relationship, the way it's a slow burn rather than a dramatic flare up. I loved how they were always on each other's minds - Will setting a test just so he could have a bit of a daydream really made me laugh!

Heeheehee, and Will being jealous of Finn? *squees* So, so cute!

The bathroom scene was uber hot. The "Finn interrupting/everybody finding out" scene that followed was really well written. There was just the right amount of tension, awkwardness, and underlying lurve.

P.S. I also loved the smooching at the end. Yay for smootching!!!!!!!!

0penhearts July 12 2010, 10:36:51 UTC

Steady progression, slow burn, always on each other's minds . . . all things I was definitely going for, so I'm really pumped to get that comment :)

And that little scene in the bathroom; it just popped in; I didn't even plan for it, and while I was writing it, I was thinking, 'Oh, yeah, this is sexy; they're jammed in a tiny bathroom,' but I really liked how it turned out, and I'm glad you did too :)