Merlin-fic for lolryne

Nov 29, 2010 23:16

Il y a quelques semaines, j'ai promis à lolryne d'écrire une fic Merlin pour elle. Et je tiens toujours mes promesse! Désolée que c'est tellement en retard, sweety, mais j'éspère qu'il te fait plaîsir quand même! ♥

It's been a while now, but once upon a time I promised lolryne to write her a Merlin-fic. And I always keep my promises! I'm sorry that this is so ( Read more... )

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archaeologist_d November 29 2010, 14:35:49 UTC
That was great. Loved that Arthur was fighting Merlin the whole time, trying to get back to his father, trying to die. Loved that Arthur made him a knight. Well done.

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0corona0 November 30 2010, 12:39:27 UTC
Oh, I'm so relieved that you think it's a good idea that Arthur made Merlin a knight. I've been wanting to write that forever, and then it just snuck its way into this fic, but I was afraid that it would seem too sudden and out of context for the reader. At the same time, I love the analogy - Merlin declared a knight with almost the same words with which Morgana was declared to be Queen.

Also very relieved that you like the idea of Arthur trying to die. I watched Bradley's excellent face-acting at the end of 3.12, and it left me under the impression that Arthur was about to either kill someone else or himself. Which makes quite a bit of sense -- imagine your only parent was facing humiliation and then death, by the girl you loved like a sister, nevertheless. Uh oh. Not good.

Enough rambling, though. Thank you very, very much! :) I hope you'll enjoy the rest of parts as well -- I'm just about to post the next part.

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bloodonmyarms November 29 2010, 14:45:38 UTC
Oh wow this was so unbelievably perfect! Really really amazing. Cannot wait for the next part, this will make this week so much better! :D

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0corona0 November 30 2010, 12:41:49 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad I can help with the wait -- and I hope the following parts won't disappoint you (no pressure, right? ;)). I'm just about to post the next one. I'd love to hear what you think about it if you get to read it! :)

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0corona0 November 30 2010, 12:44:56 UTC
As much as I adore your feedback! Thank you so, so much! I hope I can keep taking your breath away with the following parts (just about to post the next one).

I know -- my heart simply broke for Arthur at the end of the ep. Bradely sure did a brilliant job on the face-acting, didn't he?

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0corona0 November 30 2010, 12:45:49 UTC
I bloody love you for giving me awesome feedback for it. ♥ ♥ Thank you! And there's more on the way -- I'm just about to post the next part.

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sinkwriter November 29 2010, 21:58:23 UTC
*is choked up*

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0corona0 November 30 2010, 12:48:53 UTC
*hands you tissue* I wish I could tell you it was going to be alright, but there's still 6000 words to this story and I wouldn't want to give away the ending. ;) Thank you so much for commenting, though! ♥

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