Little Moments

[0_ruthless_0]

Summery: It was the little moments that made life worth living.
Pairing: Giles/Ethan.
Rating: FR 13, for minor languge and themes.

Little Moments

There were the little things, the tiny moments in between all of the pain, and the anger, and the bared teeth and heckles raised between us, that I came to appreciate.

The moments of quietness, of peace, and

Comments

[lily_diablo]

You have hit the nail pre-cisely on the head with this line here:

"Now, more than ever, I hated this aloneness.

I craved human contact -ached for it -and not just from any random stranger.

Even when Rupert had hit me, it felt better then when he simply left me. That was the worst thing that he could ever do to me."

Just awesome writing and, I gotta say, I commend you for writing in first person as much as you do. I tend to find that a bit intimidating -- afraid of injecting too much of myself into the character maybe....

Anyway. Haven't heard from you in a bit -- working on something fun? I've got a couple irons back in the fire after a crazy couple weeks finally....

[0_ruthless_0]

Thanks.

Pretty sure that this is one of the first first-person pieces that I ever seriously tackled, and there are definitely spots where the awkwardness bleeds through, but as with most things there are bits that I really love, too.

Sorry I haven’t got back to you for a little while. I am working on it, really, but between a sudden influx of RL, and -yes- a couple of things that I’m trying to drag kicking and screaming into the harsh light of day I haven’t really had much free time on my hands at all.

Really glad to hear that you’re hammering away at a couple of things, though.

Cheers.