Mid-Sem is Over~~~

Aug 20, 2010 12:57

For kh_drabble. Prompt: memento.

Fandom: Kingdom Hearts

Title: Everything but Your Smile
Word Count: 442
Characters: Namine
Notes: She watches him as he sleeps. 
When Sora finally says Kairi's name, Namine cries. )

world: kingdom hearts, words: drabble, dudette: namine

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parapluies August 20 2010, 14:34:13 UTC
I love Namora. And I love Namine, so this was truly heartbreaking to read. But it was beautiful~ :) Great job!

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06seconds_left August 21 2010, 15:27:49 UTC
Thank you! I've been having a lot of fun writing her lately. And I partially blame this on The Lovely Bones. Thanks for dropping by! :D

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naiyad August 22 2010, 15:49:33 UTC
I got chills, I did. I think you do these bittersweet pieces very well.

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06seconds_left August 23 2010, 06:41:47 UTC
Aw, thanks na! It was fun to do too! A nice break from trying to cram physics into my head.

How are you?

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naiyad August 25 2010, 18:04:57 UTC
I'm okay. I sent a long e-mail to Ira a couple of days ago. Did you get to read it? ^^ Will send another one soon. *hugs*

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06seconds_left August 26 2010, 06:58:53 UTC
Uh, don't think so. I've been here all week. And when I was at home last weekend, Ira said you still haven't replied.

Okie dokie. Stay safe, now. *hugs*

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stereochemist August 22 2010, 17:13:23 UTC
Hi there! Just here to say hi, and hoping you've had a good semester so far. Hang in there! You can do it!

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06seconds_left August 23 2010, 06:44:05 UTC
Hello! I think I'm doing okay, besides hanging on for dear life. Thanks! :D

Sorry I haven't been commenting on your posts lately. How have you been? How's it going over there?

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stereochemist August 23 2010, 17:02:14 UTC
Aw that's sweet of you, but you don't have to feel obligated to comment on my posts! :D It's not an obligation, do it only when you feel like doing it [or when you have the time to do it]. I totally don't mind.

Everything's good on my side too. The exam I was studying for is over now, so I'm trying to make time to do some stuff for Oofuri but let's see how that goes. :D

You stay strong, be yourself and enjoy your college life the best you can. Enjoy all the little things, because surprisingly, it's the little things that matter the most.

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06seconds_left August 24 2010, 13:41:53 UTC
I know. It just feels like I have to apologise for not keeping up with everyone's posts either. I'll try to do that this weekend. Or as soon as possible.

That's wonderful. So now you're on holiday? Yay for Oofuri stuff! Are you going to try for some fanfictions? (any hope of meoto, perhaps? :) )

Thanks. That's a great piece of advice. I'll do my very best to remember that. :D

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eternal_moonie October 15 2012, 14:19:59 UTC
Heartbreakingly awesome drabble!!

You totally lured me in with the "cut".

And this: In the white room, she watches as Sora begins remembering Kairi; in the white room, she watches as Sora slowly forgets Namine.

It shouldn’t hurt, not when she’s a Nobody, not when everything - the jokes, the laughter, the promise - had been nothing but an elaborate painting of lies. It shouldn’t hurt, when Namine had never, not for one moment, existed in Sora’s world.

But still the tears come, impossible and real.

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06seconds_left October 17 2012, 09:06:25 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I really do pity Namine's role in Sora's story. Though it's nice that she got a semi-happy ending.

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