1. History remains pathetic. My classmates also don't know the difference between trench warfare and guerrilla warfare. I just. FFFFFFFFF. WHY
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Oh hey this was pretty neat! Too bad you decided not to keep going with it.
Yeah, it's pretty obvious from the beginning that that kid ain't right... XD
I do find the Sandaime/Sasori interaction interesting, Sasori's exasperation with the guy amuses me.
I don't think I could really go further with it though, it differs quite a bit from the ideas I've come up with for his backstory so I'd have a hard time getting into the groove for it. (For example, I have him being sent off to war as soon as he made chuunin, spending a lot of his youth fighting in the wars that we see going on in Nagato's backstory.)
Oh god, your perfect icon is perfect. But why am I surprised? I think you have every Sasori icon known to man, or something.
I'm glad that you liked it, though. If I stop writing something and then don't look at it for a while afterward, it always seems poorly written when I come back to it. =.=
I liked Sasori's exasperation too, just because... I was afraid of writing myself into the sort of corner where I'd appear to be saying, "The only reason Sasori does bad things is because of himmmmmmmm," which doesn't work for me because aside from being a cliche... Sasori is, if nothing else, preeminently capable and I wanted that to come across.
(For example, I have him being sent off to war as soon as he made chuunin, spending a lot of his youth fighting in the wars that we see going on in Nagato's backstory.)
Oh, now that's interesting. I like the thought of those two sort of growing up on opposing sides of that whole thing.
See, the story is interesting. The way in which it's written, too. I happen to use a similar style myself sometimes.
I was wondering at what point exactly this story could end. When he comes up with the idea of turning himself into a puppet, which could have happened quite early in fact?
I liked the earliest parts the most. The four-year-old Sasori is plain adorable.
It was actually originally intended to be divided up into several parts-- the first part was going to end with him turning himself into a puppet and leaving Suna. Then there was going to be a short part where he makes Sandaime Kazekage into a puppet, and think there might have been more but I've forgotten it now... At any rate, it was going to end with the Chiyo-Sasori fight.
And thanks! Sasori just seems like he would have been so cute before he went psycho.
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Yeah, it's pretty obvious from the beginning that that kid ain't right... XD
I do find the Sandaime/Sasori interaction interesting, Sasori's exasperation with the guy amuses me.
I don't think I could really go further with it though, it differs quite a bit from the ideas I've come up with for his backstory so I'd have a hard time getting into the groove for it. (For example, I have him being sent off to war as soon as he made chuunin, spending a lot of his youth fighting in the wars that we see going on in Nagato's backstory.)
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I'm glad that you liked it, though. If I stop writing something and then don't look at it for a while afterward, it always seems poorly written when I come back to it. =.=
I liked Sasori's exasperation too, just because... I was afraid of writing myself into the sort of corner where I'd appear to be saying, "The only reason Sasori does bad things is because of himmmmmmmm," which doesn't work for me because aside from being a cliche... Sasori is, if nothing else, preeminently capable and I wanted that to come across.
(For example, I have him being sent off to war as soon as he made chuunin, spending a lot of his youth fighting in the wars that we see going on in Nagato's backstory.)
Oh, now that's interesting. I like the thought of those two sort of growing up on opposing sides of that whole thing.
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See, the story is interesting. The way in which it's written, too. I happen to use a similar style myself sometimes.
I was wondering at what point exactly this story could end. When he comes up with the idea of turning himself into a puppet, which could have happened quite early in fact?
I liked the earliest parts the most. The four-year-old Sasori is plain adorable.
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It was actually originally intended to be divided up into several parts-- the first part was going to end with him turning himself into a puppet and leaving Suna. Then there was going to be a short part where he makes Sandaime Kazekage into a puppet, and think there might have been more but I've forgotten it now... At any rate, it was going to end with the Chiyo-Sasori fight.
And thanks! Sasori just seems like he would have been so cute before he went psycho.
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