I did warn you there would be fic

[000_hester_000]

The original version of this was written on 3x5 notecards (each marked with a different-colored sticker to mark where in the story it was supposed to go), was about a billion pages long, and made absolutely no sense whatsoever. That's what I get for writing while insane, I guess. Hopefully, this version makes more sense, but please feel free to

Comments

[7owti5]

Yanno, with all the warnings, I was worried you were going to kill someone off. Still, crying angst!Fye is pretty tragic.

I liked the way you wrote this, with little dreamlike snippets as we follow Kurogane's thoughts.

On another note, I'm glad I read this today, because I've done that to people before, and it's good to remember how much damage something like that can do, before I do it again >.O

[000_hester_000]

Hee, thank you. I think I would have an emotional meltdown if Fay died. Which, knowing me, means that I'll probably write it soon.

Also, Kuro icon is weirdly cute. <3

[7owti5]

I would, too! Someone wrote that and I was ._. for like, 2 days.

*snerk* What's got Kuro-pon's panties in a bunch in that icon? (yours is so sexy. Is it from a doujinshi?)

[000_hester_000]

Is it from a doujinshi?

I think so. No, it's canon, canon, canon, dammit, be canon, you! I don't know; I didn't make it. :/

[marynyu]

Whaaaaaaa!!!!! *sniffles* Poor Fai!... Kuro-woof would never be so mean, I think... But goodness, that was cold. It's true that words can be more hurtful than anything.

(and Fai is such a good angst-vessel...^^;)

I'm not very good at con-crit, because I'm not that good a writer myself. But I did like this a lot!! Thanks.

[000_hester_000]

Thank you ^_^

Fay is like, the king of angst by now. It's a little bit ridiculous, really, but I think he's a done deal by now: destined to be angstful forevah. (In fanon, anyway.)

[passingsnail]

So well written--it begs for more though, a second chapter please so I won't feel so sad? *sob*

[000_hester_000]

Argh! I can't second chapter! I fail at continuity! D:

[lunahonou]

;o;
my heart... hurts.. like hell ;o;
*wipes tears*

that was very very very very beautiful and sad..
i almost felt Fai's feelings waaaa ;o;

[000_hester_000]

...I'm sorry. Don't die on me! Feeling Fay's feelings sounds painful; I would recommend that you don't do it in the future.

[narrow_my_bed]

Interesting read, and your language is very beautiful. Although I don't think Kurogane would ever be that cruel to Fay, I liked this story - it's quite different from most post-Tokyo KuroFay fics and even though it might appear a bit disorganised with all those strings of thoughts, it's a refreshing format and I think it fits the mood of the story. I especially appreciate that you didn't portray Fay as a weak, weepy uke but also let Kurogane reflect about his strength. Thank you for sharing this.

[000_hester_000]

Ah damn, you're right about the disorganization. Thank you.

I especially appreciate that you didn't portray Fay as a weak, weepy uke but also let Kurogane reflect about his strength.

You know, as much as I love Fay angst, the weepy uke thing that seems to keep popping up constantly in angst fics is very annoying. Fay's totally badass, and should be recognized for this. *Nodnod*

[haru_kurofai]

Fai just seems to be the perfect king of angst by now /_\ poor thing.. (Yeah, that's why I've made my avatar XDD)
I really like your style, but I don't think Kuro-sama would be that mean to Fai /_\ Things would be different if he kissed Fai and was holding him tight before he said something so mean >3
Then at least Fai could cry on his shoulder ;A;
Thanks for sharing! <33

[000_hester_000]

Fay does everything with style! Except for being a little kid, but I suppose that nobody would be very stylish if they were trapped in the freezing cold with a bunch of dead bodies.

And thank you, comments are so much love.