[FIC] Paper Hearts [Drabble]

Jun 21, 2008 16:31

Title: Paper Hearts
Pairings: YunJae
Length: long drabble (oxymoron much?)
Author: zorata
Rating: PG
Genre: romance...definitely romance
Summary: Yunho attempts at love letters

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lilxinyue June 22 2008, 08:42:13 UTC
SPOT.

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lilxinyue June 22 2008, 08:52:59 UTC
*ROFL* kattun's extra scene had me cracking up xD! i've been up all night. lol; xDD! and this is so cute and luby duby it's makes me wanna say something contradicting xD!.

I love it so much it makes me wanna puke :D xD! lol; sorries.
*points to self* nonromance-specialist liker here xD! lol xD!

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:04:02 UTC
hahaha yay for lovey dovey! I finally succeeded at fluffy stuffs XD Don't worry, I wanted to puke too writing this. *high-fives fellow nonromance-er*

But yea, I hope you got some sleep by now =D

Thank you for reading~!

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lilxinyue June 22 2008, 20:13:31 UTC
*giggles and high fives* I'm still up xD!
lol. other than that, i loved it still xD!

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kattan69 June 22 2008, 09:39:37 UTC
Aw...I love it...the mushy poems - did you do a crash course on this - they are darn good...you should write more. Too bad I'm already married, it won't serve its purpose on my husband anymore...too immune to it and he will look at me like I've grown two horns and thinking what's I'm up to now.

Anyway, love the happy ending...Yunho finally confesses his love to Jae and was accepted. And of course the final scene...the happy bungee jumping...very lovable and funny.

So this is the end of the HEART series..maybe the next one would be the BODY episodes..after all it is the next stage. Let's explore more!

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:14:17 UTC
I have a lot of experiences with mushy poems (from studying british literature...such as 'To His Coy Mistress' by Marvell as I had quoted in the fic). I know how to write cheesy stuff...it's just that it's such a pain to write! TT_TT I so had to suppress my gag-reflex when writing this... >_<

But yea, sweet mushy words are copyrighted to new couples only I think...after that, it's all about showing love in action.

I'm glad I managed a truly happy happy ending. I couldn't even believe I wrote it, because usually I don't even like to read those kinds of fics. And about the bungee jumping XD I doubt that's what you had in mind when you suggested it ^^" but that was the only way I saw the scene hehehe...

lol...body series XD as in...smut? cuz you know how much I try to avoid those.....

Thanks for reading!! <3

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chloe1910 June 24 2008, 15:08:36 UTC
I totally support the idea of the BODY series!!!!!!!

Love the love letters..so mushily romantic!!!

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zorata June 25 2008, 02:40:47 UTC
lol at the rate the suggests are going, I'll never get to continue Of Secrets >_< *feels bad*

haha I knew you'd like the love letters, you hopelessly romantic you XD

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ara_niey June 22 2008, 10:31:57 UTC
muahaha!!~
seriously..i'm REALLY thankful to chun for finding that ridiculous love letter..aish~i'm sorry yun but the love letter that you wrote earlier sucks..tsk.

and the bungee jumping is love!!~♥

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:39:05 UTC
although the original love letter sucked, I have a feeling that Jaejoong wouldn't care when it comes to Yunho. He'd like whatever Yunho gives him XD

thank you so much for reading! =D

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ara_niey June 23 2008, 00:36:14 UTC
haha~of course..as long as it conveys the message that yun loves him..he wouldn't care anyways..

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zorata June 25 2008, 02:47:05 UTC
too bad yunho didn't know that and had to endure through yoochun's ridicule. ^^"

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crystaldee June 22 2008, 10:34:37 UTC
Wakakakakakakka....
I lol at the first poem..
Bed sheet are white and so are you..???
Wakakakaak....
OMG.....
Oooh, and I love the bungee jumping scene too...
Fufufufufuf...

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:54:45 UTC
haha yunho tries too hard sometimes. ^^" it's hardly a compliment to call someone white...XD

Thank you so much for reading!

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jakiwumi June 22 2008, 11:28:45 UTC
AAAhhhhhh....love it...
so mushy...so lovely...
thanx for sharing..^_^

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:55:17 UTC
glad you liked it! XD Thanks for reading! <3

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