[FIC] Paper Hearts [Drabble]

Jun 21, 2008 16:31

Title: Paper Hearts
Pairings: YunJae
Length: long drabble (oxymoron much?)
Author: zorata
Rating: PG
Genre: romance...definitely romance
Summary: Yunho attempts at love letters

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kattan69 June 22 2008, 09:39:37 UTC
Aw...I love it...the mushy poems - did you do a crash course on this - they are darn good...you should write more. Too bad I'm already married, it won't serve its purpose on my husband anymore...too immune to it and he will look at me like I've grown two horns and thinking what's I'm up to now.

Anyway, love the happy ending...Yunho finally confesses his love to Jae and was accepted. And of course the final scene...the happy bungee jumping...very lovable and funny.

So this is the end of the HEART series..maybe the next one would be the BODY episodes..after all it is the next stage. Let's explore more!

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zorata June 22 2008, 19:14:17 UTC
I have a lot of experiences with mushy poems (from studying british literature...such as 'To His Coy Mistress' by Marvell as I had quoted in the fic). I know how to write cheesy stuff...it's just that it's such a pain to write! TT_TT I so had to suppress my gag-reflex when writing this... >_<

But yea, sweet mushy words are copyrighted to new couples only I think...after that, it's all about showing love in action.

I'm glad I managed a truly happy happy ending. I couldn't even believe I wrote it, because usually I don't even like to read those kinds of fics. And about the bungee jumping XD I doubt that's what you had in mind when you suggested it ^^" but that was the only way I saw the scene hehehe...

lol...body series XD as in...smut? cuz you know how much I try to avoid those.....

Thanks for reading!! <3

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chloe1910 June 24 2008, 15:08:36 UTC
I totally support the idea of the BODY series!!!!!!!

Love the love letters..so mushily romantic!!!

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zorata June 25 2008, 02:40:47 UTC
lol at the rate the suggests are going, I'll never get to continue Of Secrets >_< *feels bad*

haha I knew you'd like the love letters, you hopelessly romantic you XD

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chloe1910 June 25 2008, 04:44:25 UTC
Haha..you know me well..yes, I'm a hopeless romantic fool..I like mushy stuff...

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