Rough To The Touch

[zilentdreamer]

Title: Rough to the Touch
Fandom: Dragon Age II
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Fenris/Hawke
Word Count: 1907
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the world they live in.
Summary: It was as if Hawke had cast a spell, managed to reach into his blood and pull.

Comments

[riothelion]

Social anxiety over leaving a comment!? What? Lies!

I'm glad to see other people enjoying the dragon age series.

I read half way through this thinking it was a Zevran/Hawke thing even though I was reading Fenris, it only clicked when I read the bit about Denarius, I was all whaaat? I had to go back and re-read it all and then it was 'That's so Fenris' instead of 'That's so not Zevran'.

Let's see, There was a bit in the '20th' paragragh (I know what LJ does to "People talking" It irritates me) where you have:

to peel the lyrium off his bones if that's what it took. nbsp;

I have no idea what nbsp is, I even looked it up and now I may or may not know what it is.
It could also be something LJ did just to screw with us/me.
o_O

Aside from that and my Zevran dilemma... And now my dilemma dilemma because it's not the right word!

Anyway, lots of these today ,.! I thoroughly enjoyed your (*Smirk* Fantasy *Grin*) story.

Oh and just one last thought, your summary:

Summary: It was as if Hawke had cast a spell, managed to reach into his blood and pull

This says/screams to me 'I use blood magic(!)'

You're so bad Zilentdreamer!
But so good too :D

[zilentdreamer]

Haha no this one doesn't have Zevran, but something featuring him will crop up eventually. He's a fun character and I look forward to playing with him.

Thank you for pointing out that weird bit for me. LJ was freaking out on me last night when I tried to post it and I think some coding slipped through. All taken care of now.

And yes, I am bad. Very bad...~_^