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Child Of Grace: Chapter 24 - Enemies Of The Heir (Part 2)

Aug 05, 2010 00:29

ZeldaQueen: Alrighty, lords and lasses, this is it. With this, we'll finally be done with the second year and Link will rejoin us. Strap in!

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enemies of the heir, suethor: lady azar de tameran, chapter 23, fic: child of grace, part 2

Comments 9

southerngaelic August 5 2010, 06:45:28 UTC

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KILL

slozar August 8 2010, 03:35:50 UTC

You know, I just can't let this go ( ... )

anakinnotvader September 4 2010, 20:09:15 UTC

I thought the Suethor said in the first half of the chapter that the sword belonged to Slytherin! Now not only is that being contradicted but IT MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL. And nobody bothers to explain or anything, they're just like "Oh look, Gryffindor's sword even though Gryffindors in this fic are a bunch of losers who everyone hates!"

And another thing! Why did the diary get put in Ginny's cauldron if it's just a nice, sweet guy who doesn't want anybody to get hurt?

If it turns out Lucius put it there because he was forced to give her the "Lifestone" (which I hate BTW) but wanted to give her something else, too, to try and keep her safe, because he's just a big old sweetie-pie...

I'm gonna have to echo southerngaelic and go with "KILL".

zelda_queen September 5 2010, 02:30:24 UTC

I honestly have no idea at all why Lucius put the diary in Ginny's cauldron. It is never explained. NEVER. At least so far as I recall. If it was, it was done badly. I believe he only put in the Lifestone because he was forced, but that doesn't make sense either. The only reason he gave Ginny the diary in canon was he wanted to discredit Arthur by having his daughter be caught with a Dark and dangerous object.

torako_tiger February 18 2015, 22:00:12 UTC

he didn't. a "shadowy figure" snuck up behind them and did it.

zelda_queen February 18 2015, 23:34:48 UTC

That makes even LESS sense then, since we don't even know who did it, let alone why!

beacon80 May 21 2012, 21:50:34 UTC

Okay, having finished the second book, I am astounded by some of the plot holes, and even though this is two years old, I have to rant ( ... )

beacon80 May 21 2012, 23:51:21 UTC

Two smaller things I forgot:

1) Ron's infatuation with Holly serves no purpose other than to reinforce that every single male character will fall for her.

2) The tunnels she finds are absolutely pointless. Don't introduce plot elements that you're not going to use!

tarawyn January 1 2014, 04:35:14 UTC

I like the Lifestone idea as well, but the infodump (I wrote infodumb and I wasn't wrong) was SO STUPID. It would have been excellent if we'd, y'know, gotten to hear a bunch of other things from Wizarding history because we're following someone who takes more after Hermione (as we are told but not shown), but it's one of those out-of-place texture things ( ... )