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zelda_queen

Hush, Hush: Chapter 13

Jul 05, 2011 22:49

ZeldaQueen: Hey guys! I know the last few chapters have been a little dull, but don't worry! Patch is back! Feel free to hide under your beds now!

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chapter 13, suethor: becca fitzpatrick, fic: hush hush, series: hush hush

Comments 22

mogseltof July 6 2011, 04:49:15 UTC

Amazingly enough the thing that pisses me off the most is the statement that we don't have any diamonds. :Z I don't know why when there's so much more to be pissed off at.

gehayi July 6 2011, 05:47:44 UTC

I dunno--Did Not Do the Research always pisses me off considerably, mostly because it's easy enough to check facts. Many mistakes can be eliminated with a two-minute Google search.

carakasla July 6 2011, 06:28:34 UTC

As someone who is currently going through the process of having surgery, and know people who went through sudden surgeries, I do have to say that Fitzpatrick got some things wrong and others right ( ... )

zelda_queen July 10 2011, 02:27:42 UTC

Yeah, I know that there are lots of different ways those sorts of injuries are treated, by way of length of stay in the hospital and medication and all. There's really no signs of it happening at all after she's out though, besides a few token mentions of her having a "good arm", which might as well sound like she just bruised one of them.

So yeah fail, Fitzpatrick, fail indeed. -_-

aikaterini July 6 2011, 12:55:31 UTC

/You know, I have to wonder why these idiot heroine types always go to flirting first and foremost to find stuff out. Whatever happened to just asking friendly-like ( ... )

mancalledtrue July 6 2011, 14:04:56 UTC

...this entire chapter is a pool of what is this I don't even.

And as someone who's working on sporking Keiran Halycon, the intense descriptions of appearances and clothing put little shivers into my spine.

southerngaelic July 6 2011, 16:13:50 UTC

My GOD.

And re: Vee's surgery and impossible recovery time, even MEYER had a couple of months where Bella recuperated after James threw her around.

And what a great message this is. If you're a girl and need questions answered, the only way anyone will look at you/take you seriously is if you dress like a tramp and lay it on thick. Also flirting is the same thing as whoring yourself out. Also, a guy who creeps you out and mindrapes you is a perfect match so long as he's hot.

WHAT THE FLAMING FUCK