Title: SEISYuN: Prelude
Fandom: Johnny's Entertainment
Characters: TOKIO (in SEISYuN PV-verse, AU)
Rating: PG for language
Summary: Five men have five very different stories, but share a common passion: They want freedom. What moves us to put aside who we have always been and to become heroes?
Notes: This is my take on the backstories of the
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Taichi listening to Leader's broadcast. . .aklsdjlfkajd. That was the moment for me. It tied it all together, that was masterful.
I love how you completely and totally wrapped up the world in the takeover. You create consistent frames of reference like "I was born twenty-six years before the takeover began," which set the stage and don't let go.
I don't have say how awesome the wardrobe consistency is. <3 Speaking of consistency, the transition from each of the parts is sooo good. (Yes, even out of Yamaguchi's: "what's out there" to Mabo's bar, alkjdlkajdlf!) The constant symbol of the radio. . .eee!
Something I'm very proud of and respect much about this is how much your "voice" (just word choice/tone/etc, how I can tell you wrote something) doesn't come ( ... )
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LOL, funny thing about the timeline is that I haven't worked it out at all... XD I changed it two or three times while I was writing, but I plan on working it out now.
YOUR FAVORITE PARTS ARE MY FAVORITE PARTS, EEEEE. I was in love with Taichi's back when the entire end of it was different and the sentences at the start were awful. It was the most natural to edit, I think. Leader's didn't need much editing because it came out in a melancholy tone that surprises you as you go through the piece and see how positive he really is. It seems from your comment that that got across, and I'm OVERJOYED. When I got the image of Nagase's, it was SO strong. I don't think I was able to completely get it out, but I had to give it the urgency, the brevity.
Thank you for the comment. Gah. Thank you, thank you SO much.
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I gotta ask: Do I have *that* much of a presence? Granted, I do have an unhealthy TOKIO obsession. (^_^)
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