[SEISYuN] Prelude--JE

[iverin]

Title: SEISYuN: Prelude
Fandom: Johnny's Entertainment
Characters: TOKIO (in SEISYuN PV-verse, AU)
Rating: PG for language
Summary: Five men have five very different stories, but share a common passion: They want freedom. What moves us to put aside who we have always been and to become heroes?
Notes: This is my take on the backstories of the

Comments

[vicechan]

First, thank you soooo much. I'm touched to be in the same dedication as luxvesperis (whose love for TOKIO needs no explanation), and it means a lot to me to be a beacon of TOKIO love that affects you. This is a beautiful work, in more than just the scope of SEISYuN-verse.

Taichi listening to Leader's broadcast. . .aklsdjlfkajd. That was the moment for me. It tied it all together, that was masterful.

I love how you completely and totally wrapped up the world in the takeover. You create consistent frames of reference like "I was born twenty-six years before the takeover began," which set the stage and don't let go.

I don't have say how awesome the wardrobe consistency is. <3 Speaking of consistency, the transition from each of the parts is sooo good. (Yes, even out of Yamaguchi's: "what's out there" to Mabo's bar, alkjdlkajdlf!) The constant symbol of the radio. . .eee!

Something I'm very proud of and respect much about this is how much your "voice" (just word choice/tone/etc, how I can tell you wrote something) doesn't come through. . .you polished this work to the point that is truly an example of excellent writing, not just fic. Oh, and sentences used just for effect? (Especially repeating) Win. I could go on all night. <3

My personal favorite parts? Leader, Taichi, and Nagase.

If I had a JE board in my room, I'd print out bits of this fic and attach them to pics of TOKIO, right underneath some of my favorite quotes from them. I think you did them, Shusuke, and yourself proud.

You make me want to squee ridiculously over TOKIO more, and fall asleep listening to Sugar. Maybe that's the greatest compliment of all?

Thank you again for such a lovely piece. *hugs*

[iverin]

YOU GAVE ME THIS SINGLE, OKAY. XD How could I not hold you responsible?

LOL, funny thing about the timeline is that I haven't worked it out at all... XD I changed it two or three times while I was writing, but I plan on working it out now.

YOUR FAVORITE PARTS ARE MY FAVORITE PARTS, EEEEE. I was in love with Taichi's back when the entire end of it was different and the sentences at the start were awful. It was the most natural to edit, I think. Leader's didn't need much editing because it came out in a melancholy tone that surprises you as you go through the piece and see how positive he really is. It seems from your comment that that got across, and I'm OVERJOYED. When I got the image of Nagase's, it was SO strong. I don't think I was able to completely get it out, but I had to give it the urgency, the brevity.

Thank you for the comment. Gah. Thank you, thank you SO much.

[luxvesperis]

I'm touched to be in the same dedication as luxvesperis (whose love for TOKIO needs no explanation)

I gotta ask: Do I have *that* much of a presence? Granted, I do have an unhealthy TOKIO obsession. (^_^)

[vicechan]

Mmmm, I think that you are definitely a prominent person who gives a lot back to the community with translations and such. I'm not particularly actively involved in the fandom, but I know I've enjoyed things that you've worked on and I appreciate it. =)

[luxvesperis]

Coolios. Thanks. I was curious since I only move in my own personal friends-list circles plus to_ki_o, which is usually just me posting random bits and pieces, so I don't know what goes on or is said elsewhere.