BBM PICTURE PERFECT chapter 8

Apr 13, 2008 21:36



Jack opened his eyes slowly, groaning a little from just wakening.

After his eyes had cleared, he had to take a minute to register that he was at Ennis’ apartment.

He sleepily raised his hand to his face and rubbed his eyes.

“En?” Jack said.

“Ennis, you here?” Jack said, propping himself up a little.

There was no reply. Jack looked around a little and ( Read more... )

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jacks_key April 13 2008, 22:42:20 UTC
Sooo sweet, Ennis wanting to take care of Jack, and them falling asleep together. Not much happened, but who cares when it's this sweet? :)

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zankou164 April 13 2008, 22:46:01 UTC
im really glad you like it :), im going to do like a chapter 8 part 2 as a direct continuation of this although i suppose it might just be as easy to call it chapter 9 to avoid confusion lol.

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gnashsang April 13 2008, 23:45:02 UTC
oh, lots happened! lots of sweetness, which i like. loved the part about jack leaving the buttons undone, so real, and the underwear. it's true, putting on your lover's underwear, especially when the relationship is young, is definitely arousing, IMO! ;)

...and how trippy, i have been toying with the idea of a sick jack, in a flashback, where ennis has to take care of him when he has a bad flu and they're living in a van. telepsychic!

tinned spaghetti! strip tease! inhaling scent of jack's hair! li'l darlin'!

it makes me smile. thank you for PPP! (posting picture perfect) ^_^

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thanks zankou164 April 13 2008, 23:50:59 UTC
i thought people would think this chaoter just like a little blah blah blah lol. ive just lost thousands jake pics :( luckily i have most of them saved on photobucket except 500 of them which i might not see for a long time my angry moods passed though tommorow i will save all the photobucket pics back it will take a long time doing it individually but its worth it :) and the 500 i hadnt uploaded ill collect them back in time :). okay that had nothing to do with my story lol.
any way thanks for the compliment jimmy im glad you liked it :)

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gnashsang April 14 2008, 00:01:15 UTC
oh gosh, that suuuucks. thousands, wow.. well so many jake sites out there to choose from to get your stock back! oh -- that's strange because when i posted my comment the icon didn't load. i went to my profile and saw that three were missing. ugrgh. i had to reload them back, uck... anway, yeah your story was good for this sunday, it made me smile. ;)

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zankou164 April 14 2008, 00:05:40 UTC
thanks it means alot that a great writer like you is enjoying it :), and about the pictures i have all but 500 on my own person photobucket album so that will only take as much time as it takes to click and save a few thousand pictures (so a few hours really), and the ohter 500 where nearly all from the same place :), im calming down a bit now :), anyway im glad you enjoyed :)

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torry28 April 14 2008, 01:43:59 UTC
Its not always about sex, which is great but the tenderness the caring the doing for someone you love to me is extra special. Ennis showing his concern like a mother hen, worrying about her chick and Jack annoyed at first by Ennis's hovering accepts his tenderness. Yes, I think this chapter was very satisfying and lovely.
Thank you for sharing
Torry

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bbmbeliever April 14 2008, 03:04:57 UTC
they are so sweet and loving. I'm glad darlin is growing on Jack. And baby for Ennis I just love.

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