You had asked for likes and dislikes in your last entire, so here they are.
Likes: The conversations between the Zanpakutou's was hilarious! I hope you stay true to having them continue to converse throughout the series. Your capability to describe and paint the story for us readers is wonderful, as well as keeping very close to to keeping the characters in... character.
Dislikes: I would like at least some interaction between Renji and Ichigo each chapter even if its small. I would also like more conversations between said Shinigami and their Zanpakutou's. Other then that I can't find anything.
A tip if wanted: I would recommend making your series pg13/NC17 and have that in every rating, more people are likely to read if they think it won't always be pg. But thats my opinion, you may not want to take the series that way anyway. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.
Always good to here that the characters I'm writing ring true.
There is RenIchi interaction forthcoming, it just didn't fit here. I also have plans for several side stories featuring other shinigami and their zanpakutou.
Tips are always good to have, even if I don't always heed them. In this case, I couldn't change the rating to NC-17, because I don't write NC-17. Like, at all. It probably should be PG-13 anyway, though, I just have a hard time figuring out exactly where something I've written would fall in the rating system. Thank you for reading and commenting!
You asked for comments, so here's mine. I like your different zanpakutous, and how they are so similar to their shinigami. It was really fun to read how they all interacted with Zangetsu. It's a really good story so far, and I'm enjoying it alot.
As the sentient manifestations of Orihime’s spiritual power, which she had gained after repeated exposure to Ichigo’s, the Shun Shun Rikka could be considered Zangetsu’s children. He was convinced that, had things turned out a bit differently, they would have been her zanpakutou.
Wow, that's a neat take on that! :D
Hmph. Good ‘nuff. Gotta go, my idiot shinigami’s gettin’ in over his head again.
LOL. Yep, that's Renji.. ;)
You’d all lie to yourselves forever if Rukia and I weren’t here, wouldn’t you?
Without you and Rukia, we would hardly exist as we are to lie to each other, would we?
We’re giving you a chance to work this out yourselves before we step in and start knocking heads. Demurely, of course.
Of course.
LOL. That's Rukia all right.. perfectly characterized.
Nothing is wrong. It has merely been a long day
( ... )
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. And I'm particularly glad that all the characterizations hit the mark for you. And the ending was really fun to write, I just love turning Ichigo and Zangetsu loose.
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Likes: The conversations between the Zanpakutou's was hilarious! I hope you stay true to having them continue to converse throughout the series. Your capability to describe and paint the story for us readers is wonderful, as well as keeping very close to to keeping the characters in... character.
Dislikes: I would like at least some interaction between Renji and Ichigo each chapter even if its small. I would also like more conversations between said Shinigami and their Zanpakutou's. Other then that I can't find anything.
A tip if wanted: I would recommend making your series pg13/NC17 and have that in every rating, more people are likely to read if they think it won't always be pg. But thats my opinion, you may not want to take the series that way anyway. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.
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There is RenIchi interaction forthcoming, it just didn't fit here. I also have plans for several side stories featuring other shinigami and their zanpakutou.
Tips are always good to have, even if I don't always heed them. In this case, I couldn't change the rating to NC-17, because I don't write NC-17. Like, at all. It probably should be PG-13 anyway, though, I just have a hard time figuring out exactly where something I've written would fall in the rating system. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Wow, that's a neat take on that! :D
Hmph. Good ‘nuff. Gotta go, my idiot shinigami’s gettin’ in over his head again.
LOL. Yep, that's Renji.. ;)
You’d all lie to yourselves forever if Rukia and I weren’t here, wouldn’t you?
Without you and Rukia, we would hardly exist as we are to lie to each other, would we?
We’re giving you a chance to work this out yourselves before we step in and start knocking heads. Demurely, of course.
Of course.
LOL. That's Rukia all right.. perfectly characterized.
Nothing is wrong. It has merely been a long day ( ... )
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