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senbonzakura77 February 6 2008, 01:46:08 UTC
As the sentient manifestations of Orihime’s spiritual power, which she had gained after repeated exposure to Ichigo’s, the Shun Shun Rikka could be considered Zangetsu’s children. He was convinced that, had things turned out a bit differently, they would have been her zanpakutou.

Wow, that's a neat take on that! :D

Hmph. Good ‘nuff. Gotta go, my idiot shinigami’s gettin’ in over his head again.

LOL. Yep, that's Renji.. ;)

You’d all lie to yourselves forever if Rukia and I weren’t here, wouldn’t you?

Without you and Rukia, we would hardly exist as we are to lie to each other, would we?

We’re giving you a chance to work this out yourselves before we step in and start knocking heads. Demurely, of course.

Of course.

LOL. That's Rukia all right.. perfectly characterized.

Nothing is wrong. It has merely been a long day.

He raised one eyebrow and let his smile take on a slightly ironic tinge.

And I have spent nearly all of it “making them go away.”

Yeah, I figured they were sending their sneaky little zanpakutou spies. There’s no way that many shinigami want to hear how I’m doing in school or how many hollows I’ve seen lately. I mean-Soi Fon? What the hell?

That is a question I dare not contemplate.

The sky over Ichigo’s physical body was already dark, but the sun shone in his inner world as he and Zangetsu laughed together.

Perfect ending. :D Wonderful, wonderful piece!! :D

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zangetsugirl February 6 2008, 05:36:13 UTC
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. And I'm particularly glad that all the characterizations hit the mark for you. And the ending was really fun to write, I just love turning Ichigo and Zangetsu loose.

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