(crossposted from my own lj)

I've been working on another Yzak/Shiho fanfic for a while and this is what I've come up with. I'm kind of stuck right now with a scene and could use some general feedback on what I've written so far. Is it strange, out of character, boring, funny, good, bad?

Title: Untitled at the moment
Rating: PG for now
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