eighth.

Nov 13, 2010 15:32

Title: All the pieces

Fandom: Super Junior

Pairing: Kibum x Sungmin

Rating: PG-13

Words: 2 974

Chapter: 3/3

A/N: I'M REALLY REALLY SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE TT_TT I worked on it and it was ready at wensday, I finished it in the middle of the night, but then my internet became selfish and went to sleep. The next day I was re-reading the last part ( Read more... )

all the pieces, pg-13, fandom:superjunior, pairing:kisung

Leave a comment

ryan87ogawa November 14 2010, 01:29:37 UTC
I'm baaaack! /jumps in

first, I should yell at Hee for ruining the almost kissing scene! LOL

I'm glad Kibum find the will to confront Min!!! &hearts

for the plot... I guess you were a bit rushed, no? I thought you were going to describe ming's "other" problems plus his love for Kibummie~ kekekekke~~~ (like what you explained in your endnotes XD)

I like how you describe Kibum's feeling since the first chapter... how they started, how they grew into something more, and how he finally realize that he "maybe" in love with Sungmin XDDDD

Zhou Mi and Henry going shopping with Min!!! a;dkfja;sfk I'd like to see that in real life!!! LOL

I.. uh..
why does it seem that I'm still incoherent even after a good amount of sleep? oh right. I've just watched Zhou Mi's solo dance fancam from the concert last night. And it killed my brain. Seriously have you seen ittttttt?? I need Ming's solo fancam from last night, toooooooooo gotta go find some.

I'm so sorry I'm rambling like thissss XDD

anyway, congrats for finishing this chaptered kibumxsungmin~ and thank you for sharing!
I'm looking forward to reading your other fics! &hearts

Reply

yurete_on_crack November 14 2010, 11:13:30 UTC
Yaaaaaaay~~

Yes, I was rushed, bc I was changing everything from the line "perhaps it was the feeling of always watching Sungmin's back" bc I decided the ending was crappy V_V I was redoing it even right before clicking the "post" button, sooooo... yes, it was a bit rushed and I hope it's not as messy as it could be bc of constant rewriting *runs away*

I didn't want to make Kibum lovesick and hopeless *Heechul saying he's hopeless doesn't count! xD*

I HAVEN"T BC I JUST WOKE UP! and now I have to walk my dog soo NO FANCAMS YET ;;_;;

anyway,
THANK YOU and I'm realy realy glad You liked it and oh, let me finish that Hanchul I'm writing for ages now... ok, I need to shut up now. thank You and and and ok, I;m taking my dog out *waves*

Reply

yurete_on_crack November 15 2010, 09:01:37 UTC
You know what? It's Your fault. I'm writting an add to this, a Sungmin POV, happy now? xP

Reply

ryan87ogawa November 15 2010, 12:50:12 UTC
HURRAY~ XDDDD
/tells min to blow a kiss for you

Reply


Leave a comment

Up