Fanfic: A Step back
Title: A step back
Author: yume16
Disclaimer: The plot is mine...but not the boys *sob*
Beta: blursakana
Pairing(s): Ryopi
Rating: PG-13
Genre: A little angst
Warnings: none
Summary: Sometimes you have to take a step back to see things clearer
Author Notes: I am not sure about this one-shot at all, but my beta said it was okay. So I hope you enjoy this...
( “That’s for certain.” Ryo looked at him sharply till they both had to grin. )
I am so glad it was shown how much they care for each other.
Ryo really loves him and well, Pi is scared of losing him but you are right, even more so he is scared to love him. I think I wanted him to be scared of love in general. So you got it right ;)
Aww, thank you, that's so nice of you.
Hmm, this is always a difficult choice, but I can tell you that your fic is good. Getting a lot of comments never means that what you write is good, because I have seen fics with so many comments, but the grammar was so bad that even I noticed (and I am not a native speaker). It was hard for me to read.
At the moment I am not getting much comments as well, but I will keep writing because it is a great practice and it is fun for me.
If you still have fun translating then I think you should keep doing it, but if you don't like it and you are stressed, it is not good for you.
Maybe you could ask if people are still interested? Just keep in mind that it should be something you enjoy ;)
*hugs*
Hahaha, don't worry. I don't mind. I am glad if I can help you.
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You're right! As I really love translating this fic I decided to keep doing it!
That's why I posted the new chapter, the following is ready and I am curently working on the next one!
I just really want the english to be good as it not my native language also! It is so much easier in french!!!
So... yeah! I'm enjoying myself!!!
Thank you for your supprt!!!
*hugs*
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