Comments | ysabetwordsmith: Poem: "No Secrets"

ysabetwordsmith

Poem: "No Secrets"

Jan 09, 2013 20:30

This poem was inspired by a comment left by siege under the poem " Hit or Missile." It is reposted here as the linkback perk poem for the January 8, 2013 Poetry Fishbowl, originally appearing in a post by brides_koneko. It belongs to the series One God's Story of Mid-Life Crisis.

All 23 verses are now posted. You can reveal the remaining verses by linking to the ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

rix_scaedu January 10 2013, 02:58:41 UTC

I've signal boosted the unsold poetry page on LJ and that automatically goes through to Twitter.

Thank you! ysabetwordsmith January 10 2013, 03:09:34 UTC

I've added your 2 new verses.

mdlbear January 17 2013, 04:16:52 UTC

I'm not sure you caught my signal-boost links: http://mdlbear.livejournal.com/1499147.html and http://mdlbear.dreamwidth.org/1492786.html

Thank you! ysabetwordsmith January 17 2013, 04:35:50 UTC

I posted the last verse in "No Secrets."

Re: Thank you! mdlbear January 18 2013, 05:42:11 UTC

Thank you!

thnidu October 14 2013, 23:47:20 UTC

I've just been muttering "hiccuping whimper" over and over to myself. It's remarkably hard to say it straight.

Typo:
if Trobby ha snapped at him
→ had

Thank you! ysabetwordsmith October 15 2013, 00:02:02 UTC

>> I've just been muttering "hiccuping whimper" over and over to myself. It's remarkably hard to say it straight. <<

Oh ... yeah, that is kind of an unintended tongue-twister.

>> Typo:
if Trobby ha snapped at him
→ had <<

Fixed. It's actually a bug rather than a typo. Sometimes LJ cuts off first or last symbols.