A day of coffee, hyukjae and silly conversations.

[your_chum]

title: A day of coffee, hyukjae and silly conversations.
pairing: donghae/eunhyuk. donghae-centric
genre: crack, fluff, slight!angst
rating: PG-13
warning: fail! crack, my first attempt at crack and a fanfic in general. as well as slight!sexual references, not explict.
disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters mentioned except soojeon who I

Comments

[xvelvetdarkness]

I liked it :) and Donghae being racist. lol Very interesting for a first fic :)

[your_chum]

I'm pleased hahah thank you very much for the compliment! ^^

[xvelvetdarkness]

Haha no problem! I really enjoyed it!

[thesaddestlove]

LOL. Hilarious. I love their lines. Silly conversations, indeed. But there's that underlying giving of comfort from Hyukjae which is really nice of him. And the ending made me laugh, too. Good job! :D

[your_chum]

aww thank you very much for the kind words!~ yeah hyukjae isn't very good with his words hahah, again thank you!

[douliette]

I laughed. Means I liked it? :D
I don't know if it means it's good, though.
(... KIDDING. I'm a wonderful person, therefore me liking stuffs equals they're awesome. end of story.)

no really their relationship is awesome xD and donghae isn't a retard or that kind of "really five years old in an adult's body" I've read a lot lately. ME LIKE.

maaaaaybe sentences going a bit too long? but i'm just quibbling :D <3

[your_chum]

hahaah no hard feelings! xD thank you for the subtle like <3

that means a lot thank you! I'm trying to broaden his personality from his seemingly default one ^^

yeah that's what I was thinking as well! thank you for the heads up, I need to work on sentence lengths (:

[catherine_leite]

LMAO... I actually enjoyed reading this a lot. thank you.
write more!

[your_chum]

I should be thanking you for taking your time to read this, thank you!
and possibly I shall ^^

[adoraboo]

Bwahahahahahaha
This is great!
Got me giggling all the way XD

My favorite part:
“What? Your penis?” a smirk plasters on his face, a clear victory in the frenzied argument.

“Asswipe”

“Cum face”

^pure golden conversation lol XD

“Are you implying I’m yellow? Racist fuck”

“No I’m implying my dick will be all over your face if we sit in here a minute longer, I need some fresh air”

[your_chum]

aw I'm glad! I thought the crack was pretty lame tbh, I'm not really good with that genre but heyyy!~ it's pleasing to hear you like it, thank you!