Poor Yugi. There's definitely a downside to sharing THAT close a connection. But that can be an upside, too. ;)
This might be my own bias talking, but I think the mix of Anzu and Yami in his thoughts was just right. I don't think he could ever really throw one over for the other... in a way the depth he feels for both of them is going to connect them somewhat in his head. I love the transition from "not him!" to "only him." It was a bit hard to follow, and yet totally right.
Heh, that has to be my favorite line out of the entire thing, though I think I nicked it off someone... AT any rate, I'm glad you liked this. I was a bit nervous, never having written anything like this before, believable or otherwise. I'm VERY glad about the characterisation, especialy of Yami, who I find really hard to write. Yeah, I'm glad the... ah... scene worked out. THank you SO much for the review, especially considering how difficult it is for you to post at the moment. It really is much appreciated! I've crossposed this somewhere else now and it seems to be getting good reviews, which is nice. So thanks! :hugs:
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Poor Yugi. There's definitely a downside to sharing THAT close a connection. But that can be an upside, too. ;)
This might be my own bias talking, but I think the mix of Anzu and Yami in his thoughts was just right. I don't think he could ever really throw one over for the other... in a way the depth he feels for both of them is going to connect them somewhat in his head. I love the transition from "not him!" to "only him." It was a bit hard to follow, and yet totally right.
Thanks for sharing!
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AT any rate, I'm glad you liked this. I was a bit nervous, never having written anything like this before, believable or otherwise.
I'm VERY glad about the characterisation, especialy of Yami, who I find really hard to write.
Yeah, I'm glad the... ah... scene worked out. THank you SO much for the review, especially considering how difficult it is for you to post at the moment. It really is much appreciated! I've crossposed this somewhere else now and it seems to be getting good reviews, which is nice.
So thanks! :hugs:
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