THIS WAS SO SO GOOD I'M THE I;' M THIS WAS PERFECT..Y. ........................
i came here for the krisyeol but honest to god i was actually looking forward to the interactions between baekyeol halfway through the story more and that's saying a lot because i NEVER read baekyeol but i loved the friendship between them here and!!!! wow!!!! baekyeol!!! my eyes got a little teary at the part where chanyeol went to the theatre around 3 am or something right after he had the fight with kris and then he could see how baekhyun was fading adn THAT GOT ME SO SAD BECAUSE I KNEW BAEKHYUN WAS GOING TO GO AWAY SOON BUT IT MADE ME EVEN SADDER BECAUSE HE'S FINALLY ABLE TO FIND SUCCESS AFTER BAEK'S HELP and god it broke my heart so much when baekhyun insisted for them to hold hands so he can prove that he's real and!!! "promise me you'll be there for me when i need you baek" oh GOd.. ........................... and the part where chanyeol got so nervous at charlie's because baekhyun wasnt there (((and the fact that he was searching for baekhyun everywhere) was even sadder because he really needed baekhyun and it proves just how much baekhyun had helped him up to this point
AND AND!!!! WHEN CHANYEOL WENT BACK TO THE THEATRE TO SEARCH FOR BAEKHYUN AFTER FAILING AT CHARLIE'S BUT COULDNT FIND HIM AND "baek please come out" but then the 'ST ILL HERE' after he walked out !!!! i think you did that perfectly !!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHANYEOL BUYING BACON SO HE COULD BURN THEM BECAUSE THEY REMINDED HIM OF BAEKHYUN . ....... I'M .. . ...........................
and the broken spotlight at the end when chanyeol was about to start performing at rubbing elbows ---- was that baekhyun??? or was it just a reminder of what happened at the beginning of the story to wrap the whole fic up??????? either way i think it was w.... ... perfect. .. ....... you put that in there perfectly. ..............this whole fic is.. ... .. perfect.. ...
and of course the krisyeol was great :-)))) i'm glad you made baekyeol stay as friends throughout the whole thing because i think them being friends. ...... and their growing friendship .............. just makes their relationship a lot more heartbreaking and sadder and much much more REal ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
this whole fic leaves a really bittersweet feeling because from the beginning up until the end it shows how chanyeol is slowly able to become successful and overcome his fears ((((and get a hot bouyfreinf d fw tf wtf ))))) but then it's sad because the person that helped him become the way he is now is !!!!! no longer here!!!!!!!!! >>>>:((((
anyways to sum up my lengthy and incoherent comment this fic was really great and very perfect and ive never FELT this much with a fic in a really really long time!!!! ♡♡♡
Haha I'm the opposite.. I LOVEEEE Baekyeol and it makes up about 90% of the fics I read. I don't really ship Krisyeol except as bros, but that was what the recipient wanted, and I'm such a baekyeol addict that I had to somehow slot baekhyun in there regardless. So... this happened, lmao. But I'm really glad you enjoyed the interaction between Baek and Yeol so much, because this was a bit of a gamble for me and it means that it worked. As much as it pained me to make Baekhyun a dead person, I don't think this plot could have worked out with anyone else in his place.
The broken spotlight at the end is open to interpretation. If you want to think it's Baekhyun giving Chanyeol a cue to begin his performance, then you can think that. I don't even know myself, to be honest, haha. My ideas kind of have a life of their own, so I let them do what they want.
Thank you very much for this lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the fic xx
THIS WAS SO SO GOOD I'M THE I;' M THIS WAS PERFECT..Y. ........................
i came here for the krisyeol but honest to god i was actually looking forward to the interactions between baekyeol halfway through the story more and that's saying a lot because i NEVER read baekyeol but i loved the friendship between them here and!!!! wow!!!! baekyeol!!! my eyes got a little teary at the part where chanyeol went to the theatre around 3 am or something right after he had the fight with kris and then he could see how baekhyun was fading adn THAT GOT ME SO SAD BECAUSE I KNEW BAEKHYUN WAS GOING TO GO AWAY SOON BUT IT MADE ME EVEN SADDER BECAUSE HE'S FINALLY ABLE TO FIND SUCCESS AFTER BAEK'S HELP and god it broke my heart so much when baekhyun insisted for them to hold hands so he can prove that he's real and!!! "promise me you'll be there for me when i need you baek" oh GOd.. ........................... and the part where chanyeol got so nervous at charlie's because baekhyun wasnt there (((and the fact that he was searching for baekhyun everywhere) was even sadder because he really needed baekhyun and it proves just how much baekhyun had helped him up to this point
AND AND!!!! WHEN CHANYEOL WENT BACK TO THE THEATRE TO SEARCH FOR BAEKHYUN AFTER FAILING AT CHARLIE'S BUT COULDNT FIND HIM AND "baek please come out" but then the 'ST ILL HERE' after he walked out !!!! i think you did that perfectly !!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHANYEOL BUYING BACON SO HE COULD BURN THEM BECAUSE THEY REMINDED HIM OF BAEKHYUN . ....... I'M .. . ...........................
and the broken spotlight at the end when chanyeol was about to start performing at rubbing elbows ---- was that baekhyun??? or was it just a reminder of what happened at the beginning of the story to wrap the whole fic up??????? either way i think it was w.... ... perfect. .. ....... you put that in there perfectly. ..............this whole fic is.. ... .. perfect.. ...
and of course the krisyeol was great :-)))) i'm glad you made baekyeol stay as friends throughout the whole thing because i think them being friends. ...... and their growing friendship .............. just makes their relationship a lot more heartbreaking and sadder and much much more REal ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
this whole fic leaves a really bittersweet feeling because from the beginning up until the end it shows how chanyeol is slowly able to become successful and overcome his fears ((((and get a hot bouyfreinf d fw tf wtf ))))) but then it's sad because the person that helped him become the way he is now is !!!!! no longer here!!!!!!!!! >>>>:((((
anyways to sum up my lengthy and incoherent comment this fic was really great and very perfect and ive never FELT this much with a fic in a really really long time!!!! ♡♡♡
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The broken spotlight at the end is open to interpretation. If you want to think it's Baekhyun giving Chanyeol a cue to begin his performance, then you can think that. I don't even know myself, to be honest, haha. My ideas kind of have a life of their own, so I let them do what they want.
Thank you very much for this lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the fic xx
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