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kurobaa September 5 2014, 10:46:25 UTC
Oh mY-- I --I DON'T--I CAN'T--THIS WAS SO-- /LIES SPREAD EAGLE ON TOP OF YOU AND NEVER GET OFF/

GOD THIS WAS AN EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER AND ITS LATE AND I HOPE THIS COMMENT IS AT LEAST SOMEWHAT COHERENT HERE GOES

FIRST OF ALL, THE BEGINNING, WITH HIS MOTHER, WAS SO SO SO CUTE. I ADORED IT TO BITS AS IT WAS HAPPENING (BC BBY CHANYEOL OBSESSED WITH HEARING THE STORY OF HOW HIS PARENTS MET IS JUST THE CUTEST FUCKING THING). buT LITTLE DID I KNOW IT IS WHAT HAD ME TEARING UP WHEN CHANYEOL GOES HOME TO HIS MOTHER AFTER EVERYTHING, BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE SHE, HAVING KNOWN HIM THE LONGEST, PROBABLY understood how much finding his soulmate meant to him the best, so when he has to tell her that he dreampt of minseok bUT IT TURNED OUT HE WASN'T IT--I JUST. THE DISAPPOINT HE MUST HAVE FELT I CANT EVEN IMAGINE, AND having the only person who probably truly understood what it meant to him with him in that moment, I JUST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Second of all, i just have to tell you how much i fucking love Jongdae in this, because what a fucking shit head (i mean this, of course, in the most endearingly and lovingly way possible) his "Fuck off Chanyeol" had me laughing out loud. like the shut-the-fuck-up-it's-1-am kind of laughing and then obviously him thinking he got them free coffees when it was obvys minnie's ~*~*~*~*~connections~*~*~*~*~ ....that loser.

ALSO I NEED TO TALK ABOUT GIRL!BAEKHYUN/KRIS FOR A SECOND BECAUSE YIFAN DIDNT SAY A GODDAMN THING THROUGHOUT THIS ENTIRE FIC AND I WOULDN'T HAVE IT ANY OTHER WAY. (((((I was so happy when i saw that side pairing i almost cried, they are my guilty pleasure i love them together so much, so thank you for that))))

though i will say, sending them to hong kong in the middle of chanyeol's soulmate crisis was sTRAIGHT UP R U D E

okay and just so this comment doesn't get too long /laughs weakly/ i will skip riGHT to the end bECUASE IT WAS SO GOOD, IM GOING TO BE READING THE PART WHERE MINSEOK SHOUTS "THEN I'M YOURS" FOR THE NEXT TEN YEARS BECAUSE I SWEAR TO GOD, IN THAT MOMENT, EVERY HOLLYWOOD ROMANCE MOVIE I'VE EVER SEEN FLASHED BEFORE MY EYES AND THEY PALED IN COMPARISON TO THIS MOMENT I LOVED IT SO MUCH, AUTHOR-NIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A+!!!!! 20 GOLDEN STARS!!!!!!! //BAKES U A MILLION BATCHES OF COOKIE-STUFFED BROWNIES//

i DID almost punch minseok through my laptop when he wasn't there ~the morning after~ tho, bc!! u cant!! do that!! TT_TT

“Kyungsoo said you’re a sentimental fool so I might have set people up on Chanyeol Watch.” /FLINGS SELF OFF THE TOP OF A MOUNTAIN/ I JUST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i do wonder how he got there so quickly tho and not even out of breath or anything. cuuuuuurious, indeed.

also baekhyun's "wtf" text lmao i would LOVED to see that conversation

ANYWAYS I'LL PROBABLY THINK OF LIKE 10 OTHER THINGS I FORGOT TO SAY ABOUT THIS LATER, BUT FOR NOW: THANK YOU, author-nim for writing this beautiful fic, i LOVED it to pieces, your writing was beautiful and i can't believe how much i fucking lucked out on this one ;~; tytyty ty to the moon and back

also sry for the crazy capslock and exclamation points it's 3am and there's not enough of my brain functioning correctly to feel any sort of shame

(((((also, i listened to that song i laughed so fucking hard because it's almost literally my prompt. amazing. backstreet for life. backstreet forever.)))))))))

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kurobaa September 5 2014, 10:47:52 UTC
wow this looks a lot longer posted than it did in my little comment box. OTL i'm... so sorry.

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endlesstars September 10 2014, 03:27:28 UTC
I know I said it many times already but just in case you forgot, this is the nicest comment ilu T_____T I want to comment on everything but this would be too long so I'll just say thank you and I'm so happy you picked up on some of the little things (like Chanyeol/Mom) and that you liked the ending because it was the last thing I wrote and I was having a mental breakdown so I'm infinitely happy you liked it ♥

Also LMAO I wanted to make Yifan talk more but then I would have had 1000 useless side convos that would never end so he just ended up being Pushover Supportive Soulmate.

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