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grizzlybabe96 March 8 2011, 01:16:40 UTC
I'm totally in love with these constant updates. Like, no lie. <33

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chasingxrabbits March 25 2011, 08:42:31 UTC
I agree. This is my favorite story!

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jdkhfksldhb morganchelsea April 13 2011, 09:33:42 UTC
I read this all last night, I honestly can't wait for your next updates, this is just too amazing! I can't put my love for this into words

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ofloneliness May 1 2011, 09:20:40 UTC
i swear if they dont have sex soon i'm going to rip my hair out from sexual frustration.
yeah, i'm one of those people.

but no seriously, you're an AMAZING writer, its not even funny this is amazingly precious.

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I am in love with this story. rebeccs13 June 2 2011, 19:36:44 UTC
Okay so i've been reading every chapter of this story since the start and I made this account just to comment. This is gonna be a long comment. I love how you've made Alex's character so... Alex. You've captured his personality perfectly. I love how at the start he was so resistant to Jacks ways and I love how you made jack so persistant and how he was such a douche to begin with but Alex's changing him for the good. I love how Jack was so cocky to begin with and he really only wanted to get with Alex so he could count it as a personal triumph because Alex was a challenge. Then I love how Jack slowly began to let the walls he'd built around himself cave in as he began to love Alex more and more. I love how you've shown his progression and how he's becoming more loving and careful, sensitive even, but you've still kept his personality by his quirky little sexual references so he still seems like he's slightly arrogant but really he's just a big softy since he will take it slow with Alex because he knows how broken he is. I adore the ( ... )

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Re: I am in love with this story. alltimejo June 15 2011, 22:48:54 UTC
I agree :)

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