When N00bz Who Read VIZ Manga Think They Know Everthing
Title subject speaks for its self.
Anyway on the one time I try to be a nice ANBUer/Naruto fanfiction fan and help out an author who is full of themself I get a flame.
My review:
"This just screams; I watch Naruto on Cartoon Network.
First off it's Hyuuga not Hyuga, Temari's two years older than the rokie nine, Gaara's the same age as them, it's Chouji not Choji, Shino's surname is Aburame, Chouji's name is Akimichi, it's Tsunade not Sunade, Naruto calls Tsunade; Tsunade-no-baachan, Kakashi twenty-six, Iruka's twenty-four, and it's not Paradise Kiss that would be a shoujo manga. It's Icha Icha Paradaisu/Paradise."
Her oh so brillient reply was:
"if your trying to look superior or something, it's not working. your making a fool of yourself.
first of all, it is Hyuga, i have the manga. try reading. sec of all, yes i know i made a mistake on Choji, and mistake on Tsunade. people CAN make mistakes you. im not perfect. and as for ages, i did that on purpose. im not going by the book here. its my story, not yours. i put them however i want them to be. like how naruto is actually 12 in the anime, well hes 15 here. are you going to tell me that's wrong too? AND as for the Icha Icha Paradise books, i already know that. if you read my a/n next to that, it said I KNOW, I DID NOT MAKE MISTAKE, i did that on purpose for one of my friends. try thinking before you jugde. its embarrasing when your wrong."
Yes, that is how she wrote it. Really, if you are trying to tell someone that they are wrong please try and use at least six grade grammar when doing so, or its embarrasing to you. And yes she did use the classic; "It's meh story I do wanna want!" response.
Anyway on the one time I try to be a nice ANBUer/Naruto fanfiction fan and help out an author who is full of themself I get a flame.
My review:
"This just screams; I watch Naruto on Cartoon Network.
First off it's Hyuuga not Hyuga, Temari's two years older than the rokie nine, Gaara's the same age as them, it's Chouji not Choji, Shino's surname is Aburame, Chouji's name is Akimichi, it's Tsunade not Sunade, Naruto calls Tsunade; Tsunade-no-baachan, Kakashi twenty-six, Iruka's twenty-four, and it's not Paradise Kiss that would be a shoujo manga. It's Icha Icha Paradaisu/Paradise."
Her oh so brillient reply was:
"if your trying to look superior or something, it's not working. your making a fool of yourself.
first of all, it is Hyuga, i have the manga. try reading. sec of all, yes i know i made a mistake on Choji, and mistake on Tsunade. people CAN make mistakes you. im not perfect. and as for ages, i did that on purpose. im not going by the book here. its my story, not yours. i put them however i want them to be. like how naruto is actually 12 in the anime, well hes 15 here. are you going to tell me that's wrong too? AND as for the Icha Icha Paradise books, i already know that. if you read my a/n next to that, it said I KNOW, I DID NOT MAKE MISTAKE, i did that on purpose for one of my friends. try thinking before you jugde. its embarrasing when your wrong."
Yes, that is how she wrote it. Really, if you are trying to tell someone that they are wrong please try and use at least six grade grammar when doing so, or its embarrasing to you. And yes she did use the classic; "It's meh story I do wanna want!" response.