(Star Trek/SPN) Don't Care to Stay Here Long for brighteyed_jill

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Title: Don’t Care to Stay Here Long
Author: ariadnes_string
Fandoms: Star Trek/Supernatural
Characters : Kirk, McCoy, Spock; Sam, Dean
Pairings: none, gen fic
Rating: pg-13, for language.
Wordcount: 8,773
Spoilers: Through SPN 4.10.
Warnings: If any
Disclaimer: Supernatural and Star Trek belong to their respective creators.
A/N: A huge thank you to calamitycrow, for

Comments

[brighteyed_jill]

YAY! This looks fantastic, and I'm really excited to read it after work. I'll be back!

[ariadnes_string]

Oh, I hope you enjoy it!

(I'm sorry that this version is kind of a mess...I keep seeing typos and can't get in to fix them :( ) Will post a much cleaner version on my lj once we're give the all-clear....

[brighteyed_jill]

Gah! Sorry it's taken me days to get back to this. But I wanted to be able to read and comment properly, so here I am!

I keep seeing typos and can't get in to fix them I swear that mistakes are written in some kind of invisible ink that only shows up once you post on Livejournal. True story.

First off, I love the premise of this! It reads like a great episode of Supernatural, which is always a good sign. You even had hints of the overarching story-lines that are going on at this point in SPN canon (like Dean dealing with the aftermath of being in hell) that added to the authentic SPN atmosphere.

“Dude,” Dean said, low and even as he could manage, ‘cause the guy’s cocky smirk was making him feel like a cat whose fur was being rubbed the wrong way, “get offa my car.” Yes! Kirk's smirk would make Dean act exactly like a grumpy cat.

Fuck if the guy, who must’ve been a couple of years younger than Dean, didn’t sound like he was used to people doing exactly what he said-all the time. Heehee. Yeah, that's Kirk after just a little

[ariadnes_string]

Oh wow! Thanks so much for the lovely, long, detailed comment! I'm so glad you liked the story!

I'm glad you liked the Dean POV--He and Kirk are a lot alike, but (maybe because of that) I thought they would also rub each other the wrong way at times...

I was thinking a lot of "Born Under a Bad Sign," and the way Meg!Sam keeps trying to goad Dean into killing Sam, and Dean keeps saying "I'd rather die myself"--and S4 Dean has changed a lot, but it would still be very hard for him to tell Kirk to give up on Spock...

Anyway--I mostly wanted it to be fun--so I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[ariadnes_string]

Also: Greatest ending ever!! They would totally bond over the Impala!!
Glad you liked that! I actually wrote that scene first, because it just had to be!

I'm really happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[ariadnes_string]

Hey, thanks for reading!

I don't know if ST actually has time travel, but it happens to them enough in TOS and of course in the movie that I decided to just gloss over the technicalities...corner-cutting, I know...

And I guess I wasn't thinking that Kirk would actually ever hurt Dean; he just knew that Dean would never hand over the keys without a reason/excuse/ justification (heck, Dean hardly ever even offers to let Sam drive)--so they needed a kind of elaborate macho act so that everyone could save face. But I'm sorry if it came off as mean!

I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it!

[normalhumanbein]

This was such a satisfying story! Everyone's reactions were wonderfully IC, your Dean voice is amazing and I love that you didn't have an all-guns-blazing solution to Spock's possession.

[ariadnes_string]

Everyone's reactions were wonderfully IC
phew! I've hardly written any ST fic, so I was worried...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

[shinealightonme]

This is fantastic! I adore your Dean and your Kirk, and all the ways they click and clash. You did a great job of incorporating both canons without losing any of the drama and using just the right amount of humor. ^__^

[ariadnes_string]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I figured those two guys would clash as much as they clicked ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!