Comments | xmm_rossi: OOC: Windex commentary (Part I)

xmm_rossi

OOC: Windex commentary (Part I)

Jan 20, 2006 16:24

LJ Entry: Windex
Date: 10/28/2005
Players: Emma, Percy, Rossi
Requested by: Emma

Continued in Part Two

( Commentary )

Comments 9

rosmar January 21 2006, 01:58:51 UTC

In the words of Hilary Booth of Remember WENN: "Oh, the words are fine. Many of these same words occur in Shakespeare and Marlowe and Ibsen. It's the way you've /arranged/ the words that I don't like."

SHOUT-OUT TO ME.

I think your sensual writing is fine (having been on the observor and interactor side of it for, lo, these many years). Did you mean sensuous? Related to the senses? I know you're primarily visual and auditory, as am I. . . .

Anyway. I will wait to see Part 2 now!

I forgot I'd IM'd you that, about Emma's player blushing. Ahem.

xmm_emma January 21 2006, 02:10:43 UTC

*sniffs* I can't help it. I don't play these kinds of scenes very often. :(

/I/ liked the foreplay. Of course, I think I'm a pretty cerebral foreplay...er. I like banter.

bethos January 21 2006, 02:15:05 UTC

I need to work on them toooo.

Maybe I should get over my aversion to Percy flashbacks.

We'll try the others first, though, right?

xmm_emma January 21 2006, 02:15:59 UTC

Others? Do you mean William/Oliver?

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