OOC: Windex commentary (Part I)

[xmm_rossi]

LJ Entry: Windex
Date: 10/28/2005
Players: Emma, Percy, Rossi
Requested by: Emma

Continued in Part Two

Comments

[rosmar]

In the words of Hilary Booth of Remember WENN: "Oh, the words are fine. Many of these same words occur in Shakespeare and Marlowe and Ibsen. It's the way you've /arranged/ the words that I don't like."

SHOUT-OUT TO ME.

I think your sensual writing is fine (having been on the observor and interactor side of it for, lo, these many years). Did you mean sensuous? Related to the senses? I know you're primarily visual and auditory, as am I. . . .

Anyway. I will wait to see Part 2 now!

I forgot I'd IM'd you that, about Emma's player blushing. Ahem.

[xmm_emma]

*sniffs* I can't help it. I don't play these kinds of scenes very often. :(

/I/ liked the foreplay. Of course, I think I'm a pretty cerebral foreplay...er. I like banter.

[bethos]

I need to work on them toooo.

Maybe I should get over my aversion to Percy flashbacks.

We'll try the others first, though, right?

[xmm_emma]

Others? Do you mean William/Oliver?

[bethos]

Gosh, that construction in context hurts my head.

William/Emma, Oliver/Emma. If there's making out in either of those, well, it won't be very intensive, probably!

[xmm_emma]

*snickers* Yah. Any time you're up for it. :)

[rosmar]

I very much did not ask Rossi's player that over IM out of a sense of superiority or contempt. It was all, "Dude, what are you doing over there? Tell me! I want in on the fun!" Because we all have different experience and comfort zones and, you know, blushing happens. It really does.

Sex rp, for me, is just like any other rp: I would like to do it well, the way I would like to do, say, walking rp well; but it isn't a bigger deal to me than walking rp is. It's something I do with (or to) my chars to tell a story, same as everything else. Another tool in the tool box, y'know? There is no judging of other people in it! I apologize if I offended or hurt you in any way over that. Or scenes we've done. You know.

[xmm_emma]

Hey! Hey! Shush! I know! You haven't offended me. I was just being a little light-heartedly sulky. ;) We've talked, you and I, about this. I mean, hello. Look at the scene we did yesterday. It's just something I haven't done often (definately from choice when I first picked the character up), and I'm self-conscious about my own abilities to write it well in an interactive setting.

[rosmar]

Sulky makes me sad! But I understand. I get sulky over my dialogue skills. Ask xmm_percy.

I think you do it very well. I support you in it, and not just because I get TEH AWESOME RP out of it. I enjoy trying new things, myself (even if it makes me sulky, as with the dialogue crap), and I like watching other people do it, too. There's always room for improvement (let me point out all the ways in which my foreplay/sex writing is not perfect!), but that's what life is, eh? As long as we have fun with it. :)