Poetry.Com SUCKS.

[xmindthegapx]

Okay. So I have to get some form of monetary award because I need stuff to make me look good on college applications.  Unfortunately, poetry.com has some 20 line limit on poem entries. I guess I'll put it here.  Somebody, PLEASE, appreciate my work.

Guilt

The clatter, clatter behind me.
A voice.
"Excuse me!"

I turn, caught off guard.
Flustered.
"Have

Comments

[carmine_ink]

I like it. :D I love the style it's written it and how in the moment it manages to be. A moment in a life that could be overlooked for being too trivial, but hides the potential to be a desperately important. Very nice. ;D

Good luck with the applications! Wish I could help...

[noneedofcrepe]

Oh I completely agree with the above comment - so IN THE MOMENT. It's wonderful.