Poetry.Com SUCKS.

Aug 24, 2006 15:59

Okay. So I have to get some form of monetary award because I need stuff to make me look good on college applications.  Unfortunately, poetry.com has some 20 line limit on poem entries. I guess I'll put it here.  Somebody, PLEASE, appreciate my work.

Guilt

The clatter, clatter behind me.
A voice.
"Excuse me!"

I turn, caught off guard.
Flustered.
"Have you seen my bag?"

The sun is blinding.
I answer.
"No, sorry, I haven’t."

She’s pushing a buggy.
Desperate.
"I thought you might have."

She looks disheveled, lost.
Questions.
"Is she homeless?"

Her breaths are shallow.
Heavy.
"Okay. Thank you."

What do I say to her?
Nervous.
"I’m so sorry."

Not for her bag, but
Her life.
"I haven’t seen it."

She stops like a dirty bust.
Breathes out.
"It - it wasn’t much. But it was important."

My mind is filled with 
Questions.
"Is that all she has?"

The heat makes me dizzy.
Walk away.
"I’m sorry."

I hear her voice behind me.
I turn.
"Excuse me!"

She speaks to another man.
Desperate.
"Have you seen my bag?"

FIN.

So... tell me what you think?

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