Fill (Charles/Erik, spontaneous D/s, submissive Erik): Be Good (5/5)cygnautFebruary 5 2012, 16:47:47 UTC
Charles, Charles, I want to feel-with a rush Charles' pleasure crashes over his own, and then Erik's feeling what he's feeling, seeing what he's seeing. The tight heat around his cock, the bare stretch of skin in front of him, Erik's gasps each time he moves, his little desperate noises driving Charles on.
So good, so good, Charles is thinking. God, I'm going to want to fuck you constantly now, to see that look, your open mouth, hear you gasping my name… it'll never be enough, I'll have you on your knees every chance I get-
Erik isn't really coherent anymore, but he tries to project his approval of this plan. He moves, shifting his weight onto one shoulder so he can free one of his hands, reaching for himself but stopping just before he gets there, some instinct telling him to wait.
"It's okay, touch yourself, I want to feel you come, want to feel it with you, in you."
Erik whimpers for real this time and grasps his cock, still slick from earlier. He tries to squeeze in time with Charles' rhythm, tightening his body as he moves, making Charles grunt. "Fuck, Erik, go on, get yourself off-"
He stills while Erik strokes himself, waiting. Erik closes his eyes and bites his lip, missing the movement and bearing down on the weight inside him. So close. Charles grinds against him as he works, rolling his hips in a tight circle and keeping up an encouraging litany. "There, like that, good, you're doing so good, come on, come on, there."
Erik's knees go weak as he comes, shaking and gasping, and Charles lowers him down to the bed, staying inside of him and thrusting a few times in counterpoint to Erik's spasms. He stops moving when Erik lets out a near sob at the aftershocks, over-sensitive and barely able to move anymore. Charles pulls out carefully, patting Erik's hip and stroking himself off instead, gasping shortly and coming hot and wet all over his back.
Charles flops down next to him and lets out a long satisfied sigh. "Well." He uses one hand to turn Erik's head, tilting him into a sweet kiss. Erik is panting too heavily to really respond, and Charles moves back to press quick pecks against his mouth and face before collapsing onto the pillow. "Well."
"Thanks," Erik manages, twisting around in the sheets and trying to get closer to Charles, plastering himself against his side.
"Oh, it was my pleasure, anytime," Charles says, raising a hand and laughing and Erik can't help laughing too, rubbing his face against Charles' cheek and sighing with satisfaction.
There's a pause and Charles grins cheekily, "Who's my good boy?"
"Don't push it."
Charles laughs again. "Oh, and you were doing so well. Don't get smart now, I don't have the energy to spank you."
Erik puts his head down, turning it into the pillow and trying to hide the shiver that goes through him. "Yes, professor," he says, trying to be sarcastic, but it comes out almost shamefully earnest.
"Mm," Charles murmurs, nuzzling his ear. "Save that thought for next time."
Yes, please, Erik thinks, feeling Charles smile against the side of his face.
Re: Fill (Charles/Erik, spontaneous D/s, submissive Erik): Be Good (5/5)cygnautFebruary 5 2012, 17:27:12 UTC
Thanks! :D I don't have time to write it right now (I shouldn't have even wasted half the day on this...), but if someone else wants to, please have at it!
Re: Fill (Charles/Erik, spontaneous D/s, submissive Erik): Be Good (5/5)musical_emjayFebruary 5 2012, 19:24:39 UTC
Wow, I don't usually gravitate towards dom!Charles, but FFFFFFFFFFUCK ME THAT WAS SO HOT. Just perfect. For me, really formal D/s doesn't hold a candle to spontaneous situations like this. I love it when partners discover new kinks with each other, and you did such a great job with that. Charles being all, "Well. Well." at the end there was SO CHARLES, I was giggling like a loon. Lovely, lovely stuff.
Re: Fill (Charles/Erik, spontaneous D/s, submissive Erik): Be Good (5/5)cygnautFebruary 5 2012, 23:17:14 UTC
Thank you! I am all about the spontaneous and potentially ill-advised D/s too. Not that I'd recommend it for RL, but it is sooo much more interesting to read/write about for me. Glad you enjoyed.
So good, so good, Charles is thinking. God, I'm going to want to fuck you constantly now, to see that look, your open mouth, hear you gasping my name… it'll never be enough, I'll have you on your knees every chance I get-
Erik isn't really coherent anymore, but he tries to project his approval of this plan. He moves, shifting his weight onto one shoulder so he can free one of his hands, reaching for himself but stopping just before he gets there, some instinct telling him to wait.
"It's okay, touch yourself, I want to feel you come, want to feel it with you, in you."
Erik whimpers for real this time and grasps his cock, still slick from earlier. He tries to squeeze in time with Charles' rhythm, tightening his body as he moves, making Charles grunt. "Fuck, Erik, go on, get yourself off-"
He stills while Erik strokes himself, waiting. Erik closes his eyes and bites his lip, missing the movement and bearing down on the weight inside him. So close. Charles grinds against him as he works, rolling his hips in a tight circle and keeping up an encouraging litany. "There, like that, good, you're doing so good, come on, come on, there."
Erik's knees go weak as he comes, shaking and gasping, and Charles lowers him down to the bed, staying inside of him and thrusting a few times in counterpoint to Erik's spasms. He stops moving when Erik lets out a near sob at the aftershocks, over-sensitive and barely able to move anymore. Charles pulls out carefully, patting Erik's hip and stroking himself off instead, gasping shortly and coming hot and wet all over his back.
Charles flops down next to him and lets out a long satisfied sigh. "Well." He uses one hand to turn Erik's head, tilting him into a sweet kiss. Erik is panting too heavily to really respond, and Charles moves back to press quick pecks against his mouth and face before collapsing onto the pillow. "Well."
"Thanks," Erik manages, twisting around in the sheets and trying to get closer to Charles, plastering himself against his side.
"Oh, it was my pleasure, anytime," Charles says, raising a hand and laughing and Erik can't help laughing too, rubbing his face against Charles' cheek and sighing with satisfaction.
There's a pause and Charles grins cheekily, "Who's my good boy?"
"Don't push it."
Charles laughs again. "Oh, and you were doing so well. Don't get smart now, I don't have the energy to spank you."
Erik puts his head down, turning it into the pillow and trying to hide the shiver that goes through him. "Yes, professor," he says, trying to be sarcastic, but it comes out almost shamefully earnest.
"Mm," Charles murmurs, nuzzling his ear. "Save that thought for next time."
Yes, please, Erik thinks, feeling Charles smile against the side of his face.
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HOLY SHIT THIS IS HOT.
SEQUEL Y/Y?
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There's not enough of this particular power dynamic and the fact it's spur of the moment is fun and happy and incredibly hot!
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