P1: Mocha With a Hint of Stars

[xiukisses]

Title: Mocha With a Hint of Stars
For: P1
Pairings: Minseok/Sehun/Yixing
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~41.3k
Summary: If Sehun knew that walking into that coffee shop with Minseok one random day would lead them to the last, perfect piece to their little puzzle, he would’ve gone a hell of a lot sooner.
Warnings: Lu Han as a character, slight praise kink,

Comments

[fairyminseok]

DOHKY GOD
THIS IS
OKay I finished last night but had to collect myself.

Everything about this was perfectly beautiful, from beginning to end.

Xiuhun's relationship made me so fucking happy. They were just so ... idk so loving and understanding of each other with the perfect amount of give and take -- the chinese study sessions, The coffee dates, The mutual taking care of each other, even though Sehun needed it more (the part where Minseok falls asleep and sehun CARRIES HIM TO BD FUSCAGKHVKHK)

Baekhyun -- baekhyun was great

Sehun's art and his graphic novel and just every little quirk
the flirting the dialogue the little jokes
if I quoted I would have just quoted all 41k back ta you tbh..

and finally to Yixing! You made their crush on Yixing perfect -- the staring, the taking turns for drinks, the few times Minseok showed that he was just as smitten as Sehun, the cupcake snad the post it notes and the jealousy over adorable co worker lu han

and the times sehun went alone and the CUTENESS AND THE DATE!!! TE DATE!!! (S)

and the way it progressed - minseok finally kissing yixing ad yixings willingess and lovliness nd the sex nd all the convos and minseok's "honeys im home"

And finally, Sehun was relatable and beautiful especially the moments when he breaks down and taking about him being scared and Minseok assuring him that he likes Yixing as much as him and just

I'm so emotional and this is easily the best poly fic I"ve ever read.

Thank you for writing this seriously ;;;; It's so perfect.

[amaxingbaek]

/cries all over you. I don't really know what to say other than I'm so, so glad you liked it ;; This has become like my child and it got much larger than originally intended, but I'm still really happy you liked it ;;

Baekhyun <3 (although the hip line >.> I'll never forget this)

I'm so bad at writing flirting /.\ I didn't even know what I was doing, but yay it worked :D

My precious Yixing~ I loved playing around with things that I could do since I made them confined to such a small, singular space. Luhan was for you hahaha. Purely, only for you.

:D :D :D I'm honestly...I usually reply to most things, but I can't, I'm too busy sitting here like :D You picked out a good majority of my favorite parts, too ^^"

Sehun was relatable and beautiful
/wibbles everywhere
/wibbles at you

and this is easily the best poly fic I"ve ever read.
/WIBBLES EVEN MORE

Thank you so much ;; You wrote a lovely comment and the prompt was great.