P1: Mocha With a Hint of Stars

[xiukisses]

Title: Mocha With a Hint of Stars
For: P1
Pairings: Minseok/Sehun/Yixing
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~41.3k
Summary: If Sehun knew that walking into that coffee shop with Minseok one random day would lead them to the last, perfect piece to their little puzzle, he would’ve gone a hell of a lot sooner.
Warnings: Lu Han as a character, slight praise kink,

Comments

[fairyminseok]

SPOT. SPOT HIS IS MY {ROPGT AND IM SO XECITE!!!!

[fairyminseok]

DOHKY GOD

[amaxingbaek]

/cries all over you. I don't really know what to say other than I'm so, so glad you liked it ;; This has become like my child and it got much larger than originally intended, but I'm still really happy you liked it ;;

Baekhyun <3 (although the hip line >.> I'll never forget this)

I'm so bad at writing flirting /.\ I didn't even know what I was doing, but yay it worked :D

My precious Yixing~ I loved playing around with things that I could do since I made them confined to such a small, singular space. Luhan was for you hahaha. Purely, only for you.

:D :D :D I'm honestly...I usually reply to most things, but I can't, I'm too busy sitting here like :D You picked out a good majority of my favorite parts, too ^^"

Sehun was relatable and beautiful
/wibbles everywhere
/wibbles at you

and this is easily the best poly fic I"ve ever read.
/WIBBLES EVEN MORE

Thank you so much ;; You wrote a lovely comment and the prompt was great.

[humii369]

Reading this made my monday tbh, I love how cute and in love xiuhun were and how careful and considerate they were towards yixing and both sehun and yixing's insecurities and the communication and everything it was so great.

[amaxingbaek]

Ahhh I'm glad! I apparently like to make things much more complicated than they realistically have to be, but this one just felt...like I couldn't rush it, if that makes sense? I would have honestly felt bad if I didn't flesh it out as much as I did, and even then, I could've done a lot more haha.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

[naegastar]

This is so so so cute omg the entire process of SeXiu basically courting Yixing with the post-it notes and then the birthday date ;alsjdfa;

I loved seeing them go from dating to moving Yixing in too and just...I feel Sehun, I wanted to fist bump when Minseok and Yixing finally kissed too. Just...this entire thing...I could pick out so many moments that stood out but I'd just end up pretty much quoting your whole fic back to you ;w;

[amaxingbaek]

^___^ I live for the fluff!

ME TOO. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW TORTUROUS IT WAS FOR ME TO WAIT THAT LONG. Almost every scene, I just wanted to mash their faces together, but that wouldn't have turned out as well, I don't think.
<3

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it :)

[shinealightrose]

You had me from: “How may I help you?” Yixing wonders and dear God, his dimple is out to say hello.

I loved this!! Sehun and Minseok's whole relationship, how they alternated basically losing their shit whenever they tried to interact with Yixing, the silent, careful courtship, and I don't know why but one of the scenes that stood out to me was the first time Minseok got jealous of Lu Han's clinginess and Sehun really realized how much Minseok was into Yixing too. Every stage of this and their relationship was lovely. I never wanted it to end! /cries

[amaxingbaek]

That's pretty early on :O

Thank you! Haha yes, they definitely alternated losing it, but they're adorable in my mind xD I just feel that sometimes with poly fics, one of them is kind of left out? I don't know, I just wanted to make sure that it was all equal and that they ALL felt the same way about each other instead of just focusing on two of them and that they were ALL part of the relationship and that it takes time to get to that point of comfort. I hope I did it justice ;;

It really means a lot that you didn't want it to end. I have a few more things I didn't get to add that I'll hopefully be able to write someday, but we'll see ;;

Thank you for reading and commenting!!

[helensie]

omg this was so beautifully written!!!!!
i loved it! this will be from now on my fave poly relationship fic ever!
you're so great at writing<3 good job!!!