Fet
wherin I share a little bit of my other side with you.
I'm part of the Kink community in my region and have an account on the kink site FetLife (it's like Facebook for Kinksters, etc). Once in a while i recieve messages from wackos/people from different states, countries/etc usually saying "Hi, saw your profile" or the like.
Well...tonight? I got an explicit 1POV short story of a guy touching his girl.
Usually i'd ignore these things, they're dumb. but this one just made me o.0 and cringe at the poor usage of body parts and language and i'm just wondering if he thought writing porn at me would do anything (I let it be known i write Fic).
here it is:
Before my eyes were even open I could feel her hot breath on my lips. "Fuck me, Daddy," she said, grinding her sweet little ass into my groin. I could feel my meat stiffen and lengthen under me. One of the most delightful things about spooning is you can go to bed with it as an act of affection, and wake up to it as an act of sexuality - pure, animal sexuality.
"Fuck me, Daddy." She was insistent. I could feel the smooth, slightly cold silk of her panties rubbing against my shaft. It felt good. I reached around with my free hand and grabbed her hip bone - that lovely bone I'm so fond of on her which makes a little "cup" my hand fits into so nicely. I grabbed her hip socket and I pulled her ass into my hard on.
"Mmmmmm" she moaned softly. I shifted my body weight against the ass I had just pulled into me, planted my knees firmly behind her knees (to let her know who was boss) and ground my hips into her ass with a slow, deliberate, circular motion. If you can dry hump good, you can fuck good - and any woman with experience knows it. I was teasing her (and oh, how I love teasing)... giving her a taste of what was to come.
It was my way of letting her know she was my bitch, and I was about to fuck her good...
Since my left hand was already folded under her body, it was rather easy for me to reach up and "tweaked" one of her nipples quite firmly. She let out a gasp, but at the same time I reached around her hip bone with my right hand and slithered my fingers under panties. She had her legs together and her ass jacked back against me, so there was a natural kind of chastity belt created by her posture - as if she was saying her pussy was off limits to me.
Well, that wouldn't do at all. I spread her legs apart with my right hand (she instinctively obeyed) and ran my fingers over the soft mound and between her fleshy folds. She was already a little excited; they came up wet. Why waste the good stuff, you know? So I smeared her juices on her lips. I love it when I give her a taste of herself - especially when she's not expecting it. Then I put my fingers in my own mouth, to get a little taste of her myself.
now this bugged me 1. because i do NOT and WILL NOT EVER have a Daddy kink. 2? wtaf, yo? Hip socket? how is that sexy???? "Her ass jacked back against me" just had me ROLLING.
I'm sorry, sir, but I don't think you even tried at all.
x-posted @ http://bit.ly/wFrjTJ
I'm part of the Kink community in my region and have an account on the kink site FetLife (it's like Facebook for Kinksters, etc). Once in a while i recieve messages from wackos/people from different states, countries/etc usually saying "Hi, saw your profile" or the like.
Well...tonight? I got an explicit 1POV short story of a guy touching his girl.
Usually i'd ignore these things, they're dumb. but this one just made me o.0 and cringe at the poor usage of body parts and language and i'm just wondering if he thought writing porn at me would do anything (I let it be known i write Fic).
here it is:
Before my eyes were even open I could feel her hot breath on my lips. "Fuck me, Daddy," she said, grinding her sweet little ass into my groin. I could feel my meat stiffen and lengthen under me. One of the most delightful things about spooning is you can go to bed with it as an act of affection, and wake up to it as an act of sexuality - pure, animal sexuality.
"Fuck me, Daddy." She was insistent. I could feel the smooth, slightly cold silk of her panties rubbing against my shaft. It felt good. I reached around with my free hand and grabbed her hip bone - that lovely bone I'm so fond of on her which makes a little "cup" my hand fits into so nicely. I grabbed her hip socket and I pulled her ass into my hard on.
"Mmmmmm" she moaned softly. I shifted my body weight against the ass I had just pulled into me, planted my knees firmly behind her knees (to let her know who was boss) and ground my hips into her ass with a slow, deliberate, circular motion. If you can dry hump good, you can fuck good - and any woman with experience knows it. I was teasing her (and oh, how I love teasing)... giving her a taste of what was to come.
It was my way of letting her know she was my bitch, and I was about to fuck her good...
Since my left hand was already folded under her body, it was rather easy for me to reach up and "tweaked" one of her nipples quite firmly. She let out a gasp, but at the same time I reached around her hip bone with my right hand and slithered my fingers under panties. She had her legs together and her ass jacked back against me, so there was a natural kind of chastity belt created by her posture - as if she was saying her pussy was off limits to me.
Well, that wouldn't do at all. I spread her legs apart with my right hand (she instinctively obeyed) and ran my fingers over the soft mound and between her fleshy folds. She was already a little excited; they came up wet. Why waste the good stuff, you know? So I smeared her juices on her lips. I love it when I give her a taste of herself - especially when she's not expecting it. Then I put my fingers in my own mouth, to get a little taste of her myself.
now this bugged me 1. because i do NOT and WILL NOT EVER have a Daddy kink. 2? wtaf, yo? Hip socket? how is that sexy???? "Her ass jacked back against me" just had me ROLLING.
I'm sorry, sir, but I don't think you even tried at all.
x-posted @ http://bit.ly/wFrjTJ