Back to the real world, where people are narrow minded, cruel and hateful. They will need their inner strength, but they both have it, so I have full confidence you can lead them to "the farm house".
That was sweet, but not naughty. Are they actually going to pick up the kid? It is fitting to both have sex before the return of small ones and to get that "I love you" stuff clear before you introduce the kid.
wow, what a tender and sensual moment between those two lovebirds. Wonderful written. Like your concept of the use of *I love you's*.
Of course I'm all for you're naughty chapters ... hello extrem hotness alert ... but those tender moments you write are incredible sexy and erotic, too.
Now of to get Emma I guess ... but a detour wouldn't surprise me either :P
thanks, you :) I was pretty impressed with that too, when I was writing it... some of the comments at this other forum where I post this fic at asking if Natalia was going to "say it back" got me thinking... why does "I love you" need an answer? it should just be or not be.
I totally agree with you with saying those words back. Often it feels like "oh shit what do I say, well i better say them back, it's required" and not like something you want to say. I think it's more honest if you can say those words without the pressure of the need to retrn them or the need to get said them back at one.
I realise it must be hard to see a chapter end, I get that way when I'm reading an ongoing fic *grin There'll be an update today (*my today, that is ;p), I'm pretty sure about that, so hang in there!
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Like your concept of the use of *I love you's*.
Of course I'm all for you're naughty chapters ... hello extrem hotness alert ... but those tender moments you write are incredible sexy and erotic, too.
Now of to get Emma I guess ... but a detour wouldn't surprise me either :P
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