Devil Ride 30/?

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[bsofthewest]

Yes, you were right!

[xenalvr]

*puffs chest out heh.

[laniecroft]

Oh yeah car rides ... brings back some niiiice memories *eg*

For the last few chapters I was wondering who is going to say those three little words first. Way to go Olivia :D I hope she hasn't scared of Natalia.

[xenalvr]

ooh, I love it when people share personal things like that with me *grin

[bsofthewest]

Me too, she says shyly.

[hoping2]

ummmm.......yes you were! Once again that was HOT! Naughty is good *wink

[xenalvr]

read it before you went to work again? *grin

[hoping2]

HA HA!!!!! Not this time :) As laniecroft mentioned this always brought back some......uhhhhh......memories from car rides........(siiiiigh) *grin

[xenalvr]

looks like I'm not the only naughty one... *grin

[korenap]

Well it's a good thing naughty is your specialty, given how of often you feel that way, even better that you have a creative outlet for said naughty that will not lead to arrest. I believe this is the crux of any and all trouble you have writing conflict- the pull of the naughty.

[xenalvr]

"...even better that you have a creative outlet for said naughty that will not lead to arrest" -HA! well there was that time where someone walked into a stairwell at a shopping mall where I was... doing stuff that I really shouldn't be doing in a shopping mall stairwell...

"I believe this is the crux of any and all trouble you have writing conflict- the pull of the naughty." -correct me if I'm wrong but are you saying that the pull of naughty is disallowing me to write conflict? it's true, I can only think naughty thoughts... everyone should just be happy and have smutty sex all the time... heh, that said, I would hate that my gutterbrain get in the way of this becoming a good fic... so hit me over my head if I digress too much! I need guidance...

[vfullart]

Ay, that was steamy. Good thing it's very cold outside, I need some cooling off. Made me think about another cold day and foggy rental car windows. I think I'm going to be smirking all day. So thanks so very very much for that.

Is it wrong that I don't really want them to pick up Emma? Although being quiet and sneaking around is hot too...

I once had a friend tell me that "I love you"s said during a sexual act don't count. I'm hoping Natalia doesn't feel the same way. We all know Olivia meant it.

[xenalvr]

this scene jolted a rather popular memory! *laughs

as for not wanting them to pick Emma up... HA! no, not wrong. sometimes it's nice to just be in a bubble with someone you're totally into :)