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Devil Ride 29/?

Dec 06, 2010 12:19

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

Comments 12

choticraven December 6 2010, 05:01:51 UTC

*jumps and down clapping* Go Natalia! I'm so glad she did that,but I know once Mallat finds out she is with Olivia its not going to be good...

Ooo! Can we have a stupid Frank moment for another laugh? Haha! I love this story. Thanks for the update.

More please and thank you!

xenalvr December 7 2010, 02:32:02 UTC

hm, no plans to add Frank at all at the moment... I think the man's redundant *grin

cute avi! :) and yeah, I'm pretty proud of Natalia myself! thanks for reading :)

choticraven December 8 2010, 22:23:59 UTC

Well it was a runaway thought, on a late night of work. Haha! Thanks though on my avi, I happen to like little Lenore. Haha

korenap December 6 2010, 06:20:23 UTC

A little dense there Tony? Nice to see he was taken care of without the need for a tag team. So is he going to peg every guy Natalia talks to as the one? Is he going to come after N for lying since Olivia is the only one she spends time with? Will he figure out N&O are together before or after another foot is embedded in one of his appendages? I want answers soon. Okay that can wait till after Emma and another love scene...or two.

xenalvr December 7 2010, 02:34:15 UTC

yeah, I like that Natalia can sort her own shit out. It's nice to have support but sometimes we have to fight our own battles. You want smut? will do, will do. *grin

bsofthewest December 6 2010, 12:12:33 UTC

Oh, there is going to be some serious shit from that asshole! I'm calling Vizzini and ratting Mallet out...or you can, I'm just say'n.

xenalvr December 7 2010, 02:35:00 UTC

ah. well thanks for that suggestion! Haven't gotten that far in the writing of the fic yet but will keep that in mind. x

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xenalvr December 7 2010, 02:35:55 UTC

it *is rather disturbing how differently people perceive the world huh...

laniecroft December 6 2010, 16:26:03 UTC

Yikes, what a jerk. Way to go Natalia! Still I doubt this was the last we've seen of Mallet.
On to more interesting and fun things like a car ride to Chicago picking up Emma.
I'm so curious what you've planned for the first meeting of Natalia and Emma.

xenalvr December 7 2010, 02:36:50 UTC

No, 'cos not, Mallet's not so easily beaten off!
All right, next update'll be here soon enough :) *goes off to write