Wow you're one hell of an fast updater I hadn't even time to comment the last chapter, but don't even thing about slowing down the update intervale I love the daily updates. They are so cute together, this impromptu date, awesome. Best part was the beginning when Olivia reflects on Natalias support and reaction to her drama, nicely written.
Short but satisfying, just enough to move them forward. Love the way your writing their interactions and revealing them. Perfect mix of what is said and what is shown. Thanks for feeding me again so quickly.
you're welcome :) and thanks for your insightful comments, i really appreciate knowing that the little things i put in there are picked up on by readers--or reader, at the very least :)
OK, I've been deprived of basic internet for about 4 days and it was torture! I could read this on my phone, but couldn't respond...don't raise that eyebrow! So I love this premise and I know the ladies are in capable hands. I love Natalia being a hooker!.... and I love Olivia grooving on a non-stubble kiss. The entire thing is fab, and I WANT MORE NOW!
hehe, hello you! how's the move! you must be lovin' it despite not having internet for days :) glad you're enjoying this; for a while there i thought you didn't like the premise, and therefore wasn't gonna read this fic!
I meant to say in an earlier chapter that I really enjoyed this line: "malicious coward with resources" and in 'this' chapter the "honest flirt" talk was very accurate in the sense of needing a clarification since some flirting is not so honest and more of the game playin variety.
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They are so cute together, this impromptu date, awesome.
Best part was the beginning when Olivia reflects on Natalias support and reaction to her drama, nicely written.
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