§1 Heat of the kitchen [REBOOT]

Mar 10, 2012 22:31


Title: §1 Heat of the kitchen [originally aired November 17, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: "And who's the animal now, huh?" [Steve to Danny]
Content of Note: ( Read more... )

fic: steve/danno, hawaii five-0, rating: r, fiction: slash, heat of hawaii

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OMFG... This is a masterpiece, Babe ♥ montanamonroex March 10 2012, 21:42:07 UTC
OMFG... This is a masterpiece, Babe ♥ I'm so in love, that there not even words for it. This is perfect, fuckin' perfect ♥ And don't you dare to say something otherwise, cause you can't convince me ( ... )

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Re: OMFG... This is a masterpiece, Babe ♥ xcsimisiax June 20 2012, 09:26:11 UTC
Yeah awwwww I'm sooo happy you love this new way of this chapter soo much :D
Gosh I had soo much fun when I wrote this ;) And whole #dat ass thing heeheh what can I say ? :) They're kinda addicted to each other even they're to ashamed to admit this for now but believe me - they will :)

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AWWWWWW it's offical, u killed me right now :D missadria10 March 10 2012, 21:42:36 UTC
Awwwwww awwwwwwwwwww awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
OMFGGGGGGGGGGGG broooooooo, still fidin way to catch my breath, cause u're totally take it away :DDDD Awwww must tell ya babe, that this re-writtin was so amazin idea to do, cause u grown up like writter and your characters grown up too, and u needed to back to previous chapter and make somethin with it :D And u know-- THIS WAS GREAT IDEA, one of the best :D Awwww I looooove your first fisrt chapter to the beat but now u make somethin totally amazin, u blow my mind away :DDD Awww all this new scenes, all this describes, awwwww I just shiver when thinkin about it....this is real and alive in front of my eyes <3 Mahalooooooooo 4 this, u're simly amazin and I'm so proud of u and love ya sooooo much <3 <3 <3 <3
AMAZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN chapter, stolen my heart forever :)))))))

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Re: AWWWWWW it's offical, u killed me right now :D xcsimisiax June 20 2012, 09:56:39 UTC
Awwww I'm sooo happy you feel like that <3
I just wanted to give justice to this story and to boys <3
And if I did ? I'm simple happy about that :)

xxx

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I'm still in love, Babe ♥ montanamonroex March 10 2012, 21:43:06 UTC
I'm still in love, Babe ♥ But I guess it gets deeper and deeper every day and every time I got a chance to read what you have written about our boys ( ... )

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missadria10 March 10 2012, 21:44:01 UTC
Awwwwwwww broooooooooooo OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG this was blow mindin big time, Awwwwww and u know why??? Because I just could see there, together on the beach ♥ ♥ The way like u describe all this is really amazin and special ♥ ♥ U made here this background of everythin, u know what I mean? Backgrodund of their realationship ♥ And focused on Steven awwww how his feelings 4 Danny was growin at him with every day even more, his little blodndie devil owned his heart, from the first day they met in garage, and from that moment on it was just more and more, but yeeeah hell yeeeah not only Steve, cause same was with Danny too :DDD Awww I really could see them so happy on this beach, makin really good time togettehr.....all this looks and smiles, awwwww how is this amazin ♥ ♥ Awwww that touch when Danny touch steve's chest....OMFG this moment was make me speechelss, awwww ok breath!!!! "didn't want to show Danny, not only his erection but also shakin' hands" Awwwwwww u wann kill me now or what??!!!!!!!! OMG brooooooooo u blow my mind now and ament ( ... )

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xcsimisiax June 20 2012, 09:58:21 UTC
Hheehe I love so much when you're so involved into the story heehe :D

<3

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missadria10 March 10 2012, 21:45:51 UTC
Awwww my dose 4 tonight, awwwwwwww babeeee amahlo 4 this ♥ ♥ U make me so happy now even don't have to describe :D Awwww so where we stop last time :D Aha now we're at car, Danny jumped in it and rushin Steve cause he was now so hungry, but ofc he didn't put surfboard on right place so Steven needed to do from him,,,hehehehe "Get wise McGarrett! You really could take this damn stick out from your NAVY ass time to time and just enjoy your life, at least you could try, you know?” OMG was laughin like crazy on this sentence! I could see Danno in front of my eyes :D Awwww upset Danno is what I love the most, and that make me big smile all the time :D Ok now this situation inside the car, that big tension between them, they didn't talk to much cause they were lost in theri minds, but after all they were thinkin about same thing :P Awwwww and that situation when Danny went in bacery ♥ Awww Steve finally could take a breath and his thought was, well, he felt that Danny fells the same about him, and that radiate from his skin ♥ This TAKE ME ( ... )

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xcsimisiax June 20 2012, 10:36:15 UTC
Awww I'm sooo happy you enjoy this story soo sooo much and it gives you sooo big happiness :) It raises my heart :) Sooo much <3

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