§1 Heat of the kitchen [REBOOT]
Title: §1 Heat of the kitchen [originally aired November 17, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: "And who's the animal now, huh?" [Steve to Danny]
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This part was seriously like a perfectly written movie scene ♥ I love how you describe their thoughts. It so good to know what's going on in their heads. What are their thoughts and how both of them is not brave enough to make the first step. And it's kinda funny, that they both feel the same, but they both think that the other one doesn't feel the same. And I love how you use the quotes from the different epis.
I love so many things in this part. But I love the most the fact how you grabbed their characterisation. How Danny is always the Danny wavin' the hands, yelling and ranting. And how Steve is the calm one, the neat freak. But at the same time they are mimicking each other's moves and get some habits from the othe one. And they both feel that something changed in their relationship. The feelings are stronger between them. Not to mention that they are living together. My two favourite parts were the one in the car, when they went home. And you described how the heat got higher and higher in the car. And it had nothing to do with the fact that it was a hot day. :) It was more the body heat of both of them. As they couldn't stop thinking about each other. And the other one, with Danny coming down to the kitchen and saying that he took Steve's boxers. I was like "What? Danny, you bad, bad man." :D It was so freakin' funny :D
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