Not here, yet now!

[koichiko]

Title: Not here, yet now
Author: koichiko
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: NC17
Lenght: 2,422
Disclaimer: Characters don’t belong to me but to JE & Associates
Summary: Anon requested “Nino gets Ohno off at a public place” -> I chose the VS Arashi shooting <3
Hope you like it!

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Comments

[himitsu_17]

Wahooooo so risky!!

It was hot ~ Yet so so cute in the end ♥

Thank you for sharing ♥

[koichiko]

Thank you :D
And I'm glad you liked it =)
I thought the scenario was the best part, given how risky it was ;)

[killer_jaebi]

Aw so cute and yet hot~
And wow very very VERY risky xD
though (that's not rly a critic) it was quite unrealistic xD
given the fact that the audience is sitting quite close to the members/guests and there isn't rly anything in between xD
and that they only started when the countdown already had started~ it's not rly much time xD
but well it's a fanfiction afterall~ everything is possible <3

[koichiko]

Hi :D

Thank you for your long comment!

Well, I´m guessing the entire setting is quite unrealistic, really. Actually, I wanted to make it seem like time was slowing time for them and that their feelings kind of poured together in that one, fast moment.
But you are right, all in all it´s quite unrealistic, I just really really liked the setting :D

Hm, I didn´t want Nino to notice his fever just because he was to wrapped up in his thoughts and his anguish considering his feelings for Ohno. I wanted to write it in a way that made clear that he cares for Ohno more than anyone and that in that particular moment, he wanted to show Ohno that. And in the heat of the moment, he kind of didn´t notice that Ohno was sick (even though I did mention a few hints every now and then ^^)

Thanks for reading :D :D

[killer_jaebi]

Well yeah that's true~ but I like the setting a lot too~
Bc I like vs Arashi a lot and it was interesting to see which game/time u would choose for the act and how u would do it x3
(beside I kinda like risky things xD)
Aw I see~ it would make a nice scene in a movie~ with some nice slow music *-* haw they would look so nice <3..(omg does it make me a perv thinking this xD?)

Aw I like the way of ur thinking x3
and I think it kinda suits nino~ just like it suits ohno not telling nino about it~

[koichiko]

HAHAHA :D Me too!
VS Arashi is my favorite Arashi show at the moment!

:D Thank you again!

[bubbledrops]

this was really hot!
and i love it the way you wrote about their unsaid thingy. i felt right it for the ohmiya.

ne, koichiko-san. do you want to try to write a chapter-ed one? au or anything.
i think you would make an amazing story...

ah, i almost forgot! thank you for sharing :DDD

[koichiko]

:D Thank you very much! :D
I'm glad you liked it.

Also, call me Koko. It's easiert ;P
And I'm guessing you have something in mind ...?
Thing is, to me writing is a pretty tough job, I can't write things in just one go, so for me to write something chaptered and it not ending in a frustratingly long hiatus every time I can't get it done, I would have to be pretty into the idea ^^"

[bubbledrops]

hi, koko-san :D

awww, sorry, dont mind me XD
while i was reading this, an idea came to mind. the idea was that your two fics has a possibility that these are read as one series. like... the incident happened in midst of shooting, and then the night, oh-chan phoned nino... as if? haha.
besides, i thought i want to read this fic longer ^^;
un. thank you koko-san for taking my...kinda suggestion :)

[koichiko]

Ah yes ... that would have been one way to look at it, but I prefer to look at those two incidents separately.
I think I will probably write a sequel to "Picking UP" because a lot of people have been asking me for one :)

[ichi_toshimiya]

OMG this is hot...
So Ohchn can't come to Nino because he had a fever?
So Nino feeling guiltier...
But you do have fun right Nino?
I really wish they would settle and Nino would tells his feelings to Ohchn at the end. XD

thanks for making and sharing this... :))

[koichiko]

Thank you :D

Yeah, I think that´s what I wanted to say with that xD I mean, Nino could have noticed Ohno was sick, but all he did notice was the fact that Oh-chan was hotter thanusual ^^"
I made a few hints throughout the fanfiction, but I guess they were too subtle ... :P

Thank you for liking it =)

[platinum28]

Nino, that rascal, and Ohno was sick too...! I like how they seemed to be so caught up in it though (who could concentrate on anything else if Nino's hands were doing those kinds of things to you?!). ;D

Thanks for sharing!

[koichiko]

:D I wanted to kind of show that even though Nino cares so much for Ohno, he misses the little details sometimes :D
Guess it worked!
Thank you so much for reading!

;P Truuuue!

[platinum28]

You really put a lot of thought into writing this, didn't you! Nino's one track mind here was cute. :")

btw, I love your icon. <3

[koichiko]

Yeah, at least I try xD
Writing doesn't come natural to me, or at least it's not something I start and "can't stop till I'm finished"-things.
I can't write anything in one go :)
So yeah, I put at lot of thought into it.

Thank you :D