Not here, yet now!

[koichiko]

Title: Not here, yet now
Author: koichiko
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: NC17
Lenght: 2,422
Disclaimer: Characters don’t belong to me but to JE & Associates
Summary: Anon requested “Nino gets Ohno off at a public place” -> I chose the VS Arashi shooting <3
Hope you like it!

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Comments

[killer_jaebi]

Aw so cute and yet hot~
And wow very very VERY risky xD
though (that's not rly a critic) it was quite unrealistic xD
given the fact that the audience is sitting quite close to the members/guests and there isn't rly anything in between xD
and that they only started when the countdown already had started~ it's not rly much time xD
but well it's a fanfiction afterall~ everything is possible <3
(and who knows what actually already did happen but we didn't notice haha just kidding)
No srsly~ I rly liked this fanfiction x3
The way u wrote ninos ..eh well don't know what to call it~ thoughts? way of thinking? emotions xD? was just somehow very cute and showing how much he liked/cared for their leader (though he didn't notice his fever xD)
And I like the way u involved arashi~ totally knowing what he was doing xD and totally judging him for it xD (of course they would xD) only Aiba didn't haha but well it's aiba~
And so cute how Aiba cared about ohno x3
Somehow I imagined ohno rly hm how should I say~ hawt xD? (looks wise) in here~ and cute *-*
Well I'm writing weird stuff xD and very confusing xD;;;
forgive me it's quite late xD;
Anyways, again~ I liked it a lot~
(and sorry for this comment xD;;;;;;;;)

[koichiko]

Hi :D

Thank you for your long comment!

Well, I´m guessing the entire setting is quite unrealistic, really. Actually, I wanted to make it seem like time was slowing time for them and that their feelings kind of poured together in that one, fast moment.
But you are right, all in all it´s quite unrealistic, I just really really liked the setting :D

Hm, I didn´t want Nino to notice his fever just because he was to wrapped up in his thoughts and his anguish considering his feelings for Ohno. I wanted to write it in a way that made clear that he cares for Ohno more than anyone and that in that particular moment, he wanted to show Ohno that. And in the heat of the moment, he kind of didn´t notice that Ohno was sick (even though I did mention a few hints every now and then ^^)

Thanks for reading :D :D

[killer_jaebi]

Well yeah that's true~ but I like the setting a lot too~
Bc I like vs Arashi a lot and it was interesting to see which game/time u would choose for the act and how u would do it x3
(beside I kinda like risky things xD)
Aw I see~ it would make a nice scene in a movie~ with some nice slow music *-* haw they would look so nice <3..(omg does it make me a perv thinking this xD?)

Aw I like the way of ur thinking x3
and I think it kinda suits nino~ just like it suits ohno not telling nino about it~

[koichiko]

HAHAHA :D Me too!
VS Arashi is my favorite Arashi show at the moment!

:D Thank you again!

[killer_jaebi]

Yeah it's a great show~
I like it a lot but it also the show which annoys me the most sometimes xD (bc of all the handicaps xD)
but well it's still very fun show
and so many little moments *-*