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FIC: The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep (12/14)

Aug 19, 2007 19:32

Title: The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep (12/14)
Author: Wysawyg
Summary: Sam Winchester was beginning to wonder whether the demon had forgotten his plans for him. Sam Winchester had forgotten that the demon played a long game. Dark!fic. Multi-chapter. Not WIP.
Disclaimer: Everything the light touches belongs to someone else. The darkside too. It’s all ( Read more... )

longshot, the woods are lovely dark and deep, dark, fic

Comments 7

jade_bell August 22 2007, 05:16:09 UTC

Interesting chapter. I liked how in the first half you switched between snippets of conversations, and describing the different things that have been happening. Looking forward to more.

wysawyg August 23 2007, 19:06:37 UTC

Thanks. The first draft of that chapter had just the description and it just didn't work, had no energy to it so I added the conversation snippets. Glad they worked and weren't too corny!

Thanks for your comment. Next chapter will up be after the weekend (as I'm going to a beer festival and editing + beer != coherence)

twigletmoo August 22 2007, 23:01:47 UTC

At the moment, I can not begin to tell you how much I loved this chapter ( ... )

wysawyg August 23 2007, 19:09:45 UTC

Heya!

The seizures are definitely not that realistic, sadly. I started writing then thought 'Hmmm, some research would be good.' The research helped in that it inspired a few plot bunnies but it did say that Dean would be unlikely to be conscious... or at least that seizure sufferers rarely remember. I kinda hand-waved that bit 'cos I needed him conscious for a bit. Hopefully it's not too jarring for people that know better!

I meant to imply with the pills that he had been kinda stretching them out for a while, not just going complete cold turkey but even so, yeah, it was a pretty stupid thing to do (as Jo and Bobby tell him*.

Yey for super-squishes and thanks for the lovely review!

twigletmoo August 23 2007, 21:07:46 UTC

Well, Dean remaining slightly concious works better than him being completely out of it, so if it ain't broke don't fix it! Call it creative license!

twigletmoo August 22 2007, 23:04:35 UTC

Forgot to say, but I can't help noticing that you're not getting many reviews on LJ (haven't check ff.net, sorry). Have you considered adding fic to the hurt_dean community?

Link to the comm is here:

http://community.livejournal.com/hurt_dean/

wysawyg August 23 2007, 19:11:18 UTC

Fics not wildly popular but that's okay. I'm a new-ish author to fandom so I can't expect crowds of adoring admirers (Though, ya know, I wouldn't be objecting).

I'll certainly cross-post there, probably once the fic is all posted so I can just do a general 'There it is' post.

Thanks for the suggestion.