What a day it has been.

[wyntermute]

Nightmares of being an android with a death sentence in Cuba result in sleeping through part of my mandatory class, then I embarrass myself once I finally stumble in, then spend the rest of the afternoon trying not to be ill. In the end I decided to stay at home during the evening because with luck like this I was liable to get run over by a mad

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[wyntermute]

It is sad to see the characters go! Even though I've started that other DeiSaku fic, it's true that it just isn't the same... I am feeling a bit less frantic after a good night's sleep though. :P

I've given the whole fic a read-through, as you suggested. It's interesting to see how it all evolved -- even how my own writing evolved! The ending is what I want -- I feel it ends on the tone I intended and I think it's got everything in there. That said, it's a very different chapter from the others and I'm concerned that it gets bogged down towards the middle. I'm thinking of chopping about 1,000 words from the first half, but my finger always hesitates over the 'delete' key...

However, I know I've put so much into this fic that I can no longer read it over with a purely objective eye. So I will definitely take you up on that second opinion! :)

If the offer stil stands, drop me a line at moonrainstar (at) gmail (dot) com. Or if you've got MSN, you can add me with glorfindel9 (at) hotmail (dot) com. I would be really grateful for a second opinion before the fic is finally released! :)