Author's note: Okay! So, this is the (finished? more nearly finished? much improved, anyway) version of what used to be Chapter Two and is now Part III. Since the previous draft, I've adjusted some of the dialogue so that (I hope) it flows better; I've also written some more material from Obi-Wan's POV, and I had intended to post it concurrently ( Read more... )

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( an expression of triumphant belligerence ... )

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CHAPTER TWO:

The debriefing went about as badly as Obi-Wan had expected.  The mission had been an unmitigated disaster from start to finish, after all.  He didn’t think any mission that ended in actually banning the Jedi from the planet could ( Read more... )

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Author's note: This chapter is shameless Ryn/Ani fluff, with a little Yoda philosophy and a dash of political intrigue tossed in for flavor. I make no apologies. Love it or hate it? Let me know! :)

CHAPTER THREE

Ryn wandered into the Kenobi- ( Read more... )

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Author's note: This was one of my favorite chapters when I wrote it, for no apparent reason. Maybe I was just in a good mood that night? Or maybe I just like writing for Ferus.  Anyway, it doesn't really advance the plot at all much, but I left it in ( Read more... )

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CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR

Anakin kept an eye on Ryn as they followed Ferus down the corridor. She’d said she was all right, but ... she looked so tired, so wrung-out. As though she had just gone through some horrible ordeal, her skin still bluish-pale.

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