Chapter one COMMENT PLEASE!! (it's supposed to be short)
A searing heat traveled through her entire body, every muscle went numb. Her heart stopped, her breath ceased. She could hear him shouting her name yet his voice sounded as if they were under water; dull and hallow. He stood over her, eyes full of distress and agony. Her hand went to her chest it was warm and wet. Pulling it away she gasped with shock. Traveling down her fingers in little rivulets was her own dark, warm blood. A single tear moved across her cheek; then in a swift movement she pulled away from him and turned onto her side, rolling up into a ball she closed her eyes and watched it all fly by…