Sight Seeing - V3.0
Hello all (again)
You will find a re-edited version of my poem, Sight Seeing, down the list with the original entry (May 21st) as a LJ cut.
Please have a gander and tell me what you think, ESPECIALLY (but not limited to) THOSE WHO COMMENTED ON THE FIRST ONE.
I think you will find this one to be much clearer and the structure much improved. Always room for improvement though...no?